Writing a speech on Queen Elizabeth I

Im trying to write this speech on Queen Elizabeth I and i need some help on my thesis statement. What i have so far is Queen Elizabeth is an important part in England's history; she had such an interesting life from before she was Queen to when she ruled, also she did many remarkable things while in power.

Im only in 9th grade and im not sure if this is high school work. I want my thesis to be better but dont know what elts to put, or how to change it to be a really good thesis. i have to have three body paragraphs and the three things in my thesis that tell about them. I need help...Can you help me?

What are the instructions your teacher gave you?

You can make your thesis statement more captivating to draw the reader in.

These are all true, but they are obvious. When you give a speech or essay, it's because you have something new to add to a discussion among people. So, your task is to make an interesting observation.

Sometimes it is interesting to compare her to someone else.
Sometimes it's interesting to come up with a word that perfectly describes her, and that word becomes the theme of your essay.

Look at interesting articles that have been written about her, and you'll see that the best ones have something that makes them (the article) unique.

All you have to do is read and read, and you'll come up with lots of great ideas about her. You can do it. You could even do it if it was college work. If you read every day you'll see that it is not that hard!

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