fabxx 9 / 6 Nov 27, 2008 #1Hi Gloria!Please help me check for grammar errors, and suggestions on how to make them better? Thanks in advance!!These are for my activities list.1. Chinese calligraphy: we have to use a brush and write beautiful traditional Chinese characters. This was very hard for me because one extra line or dot can change the whole word.2. Co-founder of Funky Union, a club that sells homemade treats after school and then donate the money to my local shelters. It feels wonderful to contribute.3.Peking Opera can be defined as Chinese cultural dance-battle between two. Wooden swords are involved. I am honored to participate in such a rare activity4. I am the editor in chief of my school yearbook. I am in charge of selecting the best from all our ideas, make them work out and make sure our peers like them.5. I was elected as the Public Relations Officer in the Student Council. The Public Relations Officer 'markets' activities and events to students and teachers.
EF_Team5 - / 1585 Nov 27, 2008 #2Good morning :)Sure!Avoid using "we." That makes it sound like more than one person is writing the paper. Instead try using "me" or "I."'markets' should be "markets."Otherwise, I think this list looks really good. Great job!Regards,GloriaMOderator, EssayForum.com