Part A "We know that diversity makes us a better university - better for learning, for teaching, and for conducting research."
(U-M President Mary Sue Coleman)
Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment
on how your personal experiences and achievements would contribute to the diversity of the University of Michigan.
My hand shakes as I grip the buzzer.
The moderator asks: "In Erwin Schrodinger's model of the atom, what did he replace electrons with?"
As I try and recollect information from my physics class, I hear a buzz. I glance to my left and see my teammate's box light up. "De Broglie Waves" he says. It's correct and we are given a bonus group question. This question rings a bell, but I am uncertain. After discussing it with my teammates we arrive at a final answer. We get the extra point, which ends the round.
Andover High School has a science team, although the word 'team' should be used loosely. They compete separately, even against each other, and the points are added up at the end. While it is an excellent academic experience, I was looking for something that involved working with others. After many Google searches, I found the perfect competition: National Science Bowl. I put up fliers and began recruiting. While our team studied, I had the opportunity to work with some of the brightest students in our grade. The top five students from our school competed at the regional competition and although we did not place first, it was unbelievably worthwhile. Each student on the team was brilliant, but had a distinctive thought process. Having a thousand students who think exactly the same does not even begin to compare to just five students with completely different ways of thinking. I have a unique reasoning that will contribute to the diversity of University of Michigan.
Part C
Describe a setback that you have faced.How
did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect
you? If something similar happened in the
future, how would you react?
"Could she be any slower?" I thought to myself as the middle-aged woman finally appeared from the big metal doors. I studied her face which was completely void of any happiness. Before she even said, I had known it. We missed our flight. But even just hearing her say, "I'm sorry, they are already for take-off", was like getting sucker-punched in the gut. Any other time, missing my flight would be okay, but I had to be on that flight back to Massachusetts. The following the day I would be attending a summer pre-college program, and I had already missed orientation. Being late even one more day would mean missing classes, which result in not being able to attend the program. Hyperventilating, I attentively studied the "Departures" board, looking for the next flight to Munich and calculating whether or not we would catch our connecting flight from there.
We were sent to the Transfer Services, who then informed us that we had to call our airline company, all the while losing precious minutes. At this rate we would never get on the next flight. Finally, we found a phone in a lounge and while my dad was on the phone, I paced nervously behind him chomping down potato chips. My brother snatched the bag away from me, so I began chugging soda. I could not function; all I could do was gape at the fact that my dad was now listing dates and times that were in the next week. I glanced around hoping my mother and brother would share this incredulity. Instead, I was shocked to find them leisurely on the computer playing Text Twist and checking their email. Why were they not _______ (freaking out)? And then I thought "Why am I freaking out?" I was stressed and with all the bad outcomes zipping through my mind, I did not even stop to realize how unproductive (WC?) I was. Stuffing my face and ____ over my dad would not change anything.
So, I took a deep breath, walked over to the nearest computer and googled every local college I could think of. I was not taking any chances; if I could not attend the summer program, I was not going to slum around (WC) at home all summer. Hours past and while searching for dance classes, my dad's face appeared behind my computer screen. The next flight with openings was four days later. It was disappointing, but it was okay, because in just those few hours I already had a summer course, dance classes and job lined up.
My summer, by no means, worked out the way I had planned. Instead of meeting new people from all over the country (<does this make sense?), I was taking a class with students in their mid-twenties and serving fried food, while sore from a day of dance. If I had not calmed down, I am not sure I would have ended up with the same summer. Pacing around will not magically make four seats appear on an airplane. Being able to relax, allowed me to solve my problem. I know that frantically dwelling on the past will not change anything, but if I relax, I can begin to find real solutions.
I know my closing needs work. These are all rough drafts! Any advice would be greatly appreciated!
(U-M President Mary Sue Coleman)
Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment
on how your personal experiences and achievements would contribute to the diversity of the University of Michigan.
My hand shakes as I grip the buzzer.
The moderator asks: "In Erwin Schrodinger's model of the atom, what did he replace electrons with?"
As I try and recollect information from my physics class, I hear a buzz. I glance to my left and see my teammate's box light up. "De Broglie Waves" he says. It's correct and we are given a bonus group question. This question rings a bell, but I am uncertain. After discussing it with my teammates we arrive at a final answer. We get the extra point, which ends the round.
Andover High School has a science team, although the word 'team' should be used loosely. They compete separately, even against each other, and the points are added up at the end. While it is an excellent academic experience, I was looking for something that involved working with others. After many Google searches, I found the perfect competition: National Science Bowl. I put up fliers and began recruiting. While our team studied, I had the opportunity to work with some of the brightest students in our grade. The top five students from our school competed at the regional competition and although we did not place first, it was unbelievably worthwhile. Each student on the team was brilliant, but had a distinctive thought process. Having a thousand students who think exactly the same does not even begin to compare to just five students with completely different ways of thinking. I have a unique reasoning that will contribute to the diversity of University of Michigan.
Part C
Describe a setback that you have faced.How
did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect
you? If something similar happened in the
future, how would you react?
"Could she be any slower?" I thought to myself as the middle-aged woman finally appeared from the big metal doors. I studied her face which was completely void of any happiness. Before she even said, I had known it. We missed our flight. But even just hearing her say, "I'm sorry, they are already for take-off", was like getting sucker-punched in the gut. Any other time, missing my flight would be okay, but I had to be on that flight back to Massachusetts. The following the day I would be attending a summer pre-college program, and I had already missed orientation. Being late even one more day would mean missing classes, which result in not being able to attend the program. Hyperventilating, I attentively studied the "Departures" board, looking for the next flight to Munich and calculating whether or not we would catch our connecting flight from there.
We were sent to the Transfer Services, who then informed us that we had to call our airline company, all the while losing precious minutes. At this rate we would never get on the next flight. Finally, we found a phone in a lounge and while my dad was on the phone, I paced nervously behind him chomping down potato chips. My brother snatched the bag away from me, so I began chugging soda. I could not function; all I could do was gape at the fact that my dad was now listing dates and times that were in the next week. I glanced around hoping my mother and brother would share this incredulity. Instead, I was shocked to find them leisurely on the computer playing Text Twist and checking their email. Why were they not _______ (freaking out)? And then I thought "Why am I freaking out?" I was stressed and with all the bad outcomes zipping through my mind, I did not even stop to realize how unproductive (WC?) I was. Stuffing my face and ____ over my dad would not change anything.
So, I took a deep breath, walked over to the nearest computer and googled every local college I could think of. I was not taking any chances; if I could not attend the summer program, I was not going to slum around (WC) at home all summer. Hours past and while searching for dance classes, my dad's face appeared behind my computer screen. The next flight with openings was four days later. It was disappointing, but it was okay, because in just those few hours I already had a summer course, dance classes and job lined up.
My summer, by no means, worked out the way I had planned. Instead of meeting new people from all over the country (<does this make sense?), I was taking a class with students in their mid-twenties and serving fried food, while sore from a day of dance. If I had not calmed down, I am not sure I would have ended up with the same summer. Pacing around will not magically make four seats appear on an airplane. Being able to relax, allowed me to solve my problem. I know that frantically dwelling on the past will not change anything, but if I relax, I can begin to find real solutions.
I know my closing needs work. These are all rough drafts! Any advice would be greatly appreciated!