Short answer essay questions (yoga, tennis)

hi can u please edit these sentences for me

what helps you to feel physically or mentally renewed other than a good night's rest?

Taking a yoga class at my school helps me rejuvenate myself and concentrate on positive thoughts. This helps me to gain a fresh perspective on things.

what would you do with a free afternoon?

On a free afternoon, I would love to play tennis with my dad or cook a nice meal for my family.

what is something that you are especially proud of?

Whether it is celebrating Diwali, visiting Hindu temples, or learning classical Indian singing, I am especially proud of my Indian heritage.

thank you
nikita

how short do these have to be?

for the first one i don't think you really answered the question. slightly but not exactly

second one? you could remove the words on a free afternoon since its just repeating the question

and the last one i think is fine

:)

what helps you to feel physically or mentally renewed other than a good night's rest?

Taking a yoga class at my schooll helps rejuvenate me and I concentrate on positive thoughts. This helps me to gain fresh perspective on things.

I could find nothing wrong with the other sentences, and especially liked the last one.

:)

Kevin

On a free afternoon, I would love to play tennis with my dad or cook a nice meal for my family.

i would write, "On a free afternoon, I would love playing tennis with my dad or cooking a nice meal for my family."

Most of the sentences are pretty good. You might want to make the following change, though:

"On a free afternoon, I would love to play tennis with my dad or cook a nice meal for my family."