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Write an essay defending the role and place of the arts, especially those forms that are not commercial in our society. In answering this question, feel free to focus on one particular art form.
Classicism
The professor in our World Arts and Cultures class had just opened a new section of the study of fine arts. It was called Classicism. I didn't know how important this part of our studies was until I noticed him talking about 'Kritios Boy' with passion. On that day I learned about the dawn of all classical art works. Kritios Boy was a sculpture born to show the perfect image of the human body.
Cheers!
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Write an essay defending the role and place of the arts, especially those forms that are not commercial in our society. In answering this question, feel free to focus on one particular art form.
Classicism
The professor in our World Arts and Cultures class had just opened a new section of the study of fine arts. It was called Classicism. I didn't know how important this part of our studies was until I noticed him talking about 'Kritios Boy' with passion. On that day I learned about the dawn of all classical art works. Kritios Boy was a sculpture born to show the perfect image of the human body.