Question: Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
- Helloo! So this experience really shaped who I am today. I talked about multiple incidents in camp so its not one story but the entire experience. -- I am not done yet so any feedback or suggestion would be great! :D
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At the age of 8 I traveled alone to attend a 2-week summer camp in Switzerland, which is 1,848 miles from home, for the very first time.
Maggots! For the first week of camp I cried every day to my mother on the phone and refused to unpack, believing that a plane was on its way to take me home. After I accepted the fact that I was "stuck-here" for another week, whether I liked it or not, I decided to unpack my bag and to my surprise I found a rotten banana and maggots everywhere! My friends and councilors both refused to help me and told me that I must clean the bag/room myself. In my time of need I found no one. Ultimately, I managed to get rid of the maggots with the help of my roommate(although there was still some living in my socks, which I shockingly discovered later).However, through this experience I learned to depend on "me" and that in rough times, only the people who really care will stay and help. This shaped the way I chose my friends. When I went back home I distinguished between the ones who would be there for me and the ones who were only there for the fun times.
Additionally, traveling abroad for the very first time, I was very ignorant of the cultures and religions that existed outside my country. In the first day of camp I was roomed with a girl who was from a country that was not on good terms with mine. Our countries actually considered themselves "enemies" and I was brought up to believe that all citizens of this country are my enemies. However when I interacted with this girl I realized that this was not the case. When I shared my piece of KitKat with her we instantly became friends and were able to break these relation barriers created by our countries. This girl also had completely different religious views than I did. Coming from a very conservative and religious country, I was shocked to see someone believing in something different than what I believed. Being friends with someone who came from a different culture with different beliefs allowed me to be tolerant, knowledgeable and aware.
At camp, I also experienced bullying for the first time, which shaped who I am today. In school I was crowned "princess of the grade" by my friends and was treated almost like royalty to the point where they would carry me in on their shoulders from the playground to the classroom so I can make an "entrance". However at camp, I surprisingly wasn't a princess and the campers certainly did not treat me like one. They made fun of me and talked behind my back. I felt terrible; as it was the first time I was put in such a situation. This was my first worst experience but without it would have probably become an arrogant little princess.
I also entered my very first talent show at camp, which sparked my interest in music. Although I did a rendition of the theme song from the move Fat Albert and probably looked like a fool, the audience really liked it and that positive reaction was what encouraged me to start singing/performing. Because of that experience music became a central part of my identity and, I now perform live in in music shows and have my very own successful singing channel.
All in all, with its ups and downs, attending summer camp in Switzerland at the age of 8 was truly a wonderful experience. I got home sick a lot but when it was finally time to leave, I wanted to stay. Looking back at this experience, it truly made me who I am today and everything I experienced there surely became part of my identity.
- Helloo! So this experience really shaped who I am today. I talked about multiple incidents in camp so its not one story but the entire experience. -- I am not done yet so any feedback or suggestion would be great! :D
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At the age of 8 I traveled alone to attend a 2-week summer camp in Switzerland, which is 1,848 miles from home, for the very first time.
Maggots! For the first week of camp I cried every day to my mother on the phone and refused to unpack, believing that a plane was on its way to take me home. After I accepted the fact that I was "stuck-here" for another week, whether I liked it or not, I decided to unpack my bag and to my surprise I found a rotten banana and maggots everywhere! My friends and councilors both refused to help me and told me that I must clean the bag/room myself. In my time of need I found no one. Ultimately, I managed to get rid of the maggots with the help of my roommate(although there was still some living in my socks, which I shockingly discovered later).However, through this experience I learned to depend on "me" and that in rough times, only the people who really care will stay and help. This shaped the way I chose my friends. When I went back home I distinguished between the ones who would be there for me and the ones who were only there for the fun times.
Additionally, traveling abroad for the very first time, I was very ignorant of the cultures and religions that existed outside my country. In the first day of camp I was roomed with a girl who was from a country that was not on good terms with mine. Our countries actually considered themselves "enemies" and I was brought up to believe that all citizens of this country are my enemies. However when I interacted with this girl I realized that this was not the case. When I shared my piece of KitKat with her we instantly became friends and were able to break these relation barriers created by our countries. This girl also had completely different religious views than I did. Coming from a very conservative and religious country, I was shocked to see someone believing in something different than what I believed. Being friends with someone who came from a different culture with different beliefs allowed me to be tolerant, knowledgeable and aware.
At camp, I also experienced bullying for the first time, which shaped who I am today. In school I was crowned "princess of the grade" by my friends and was treated almost like royalty to the point where they would carry me in on their shoulders from the playground to the classroom so I can make an "entrance". However at camp, I surprisingly wasn't a princess and the campers certainly did not treat me like one. They made fun of me and talked behind my back. I felt terrible; as it was the first time I was put in such a situation. This was my first worst experience but without it would have probably become an arrogant little princess.
I also entered my very first talent show at camp, which sparked my interest in music. Although I did a rendition of the theme song from the move Fat Albert and probably looked like a fool, the audience really liked it and that positive reaction was what encouraged me to start singing/performing. Because of that experience music became a central part of my identity and, I now perform live in in music shows and have my very own successful singing channel.
All in all, with its ups and downs, attending summer camp in Switzerland at the age of 8 was truly a wonderful experience. I got home sick a lot but when it was finally time to leave, I wanted to stay. Looking back at this experience, it truly made me who I am today and everything I experienced there surely became part of my identity.
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