Boredom is not an option ; NYU Supp : Why NYU?

Prompt: Tell us why you have chosen the above campus (using a maximum of 700 characters-spaces and punctuation included).

It's New York City. Boredom is not an option in the city that never sleeps. It is where careers are built, cultures fuse, and everything is at your fingertips. And NYU New York embodies the very best of this bustling city. With the city as its extended campus, NYU New York is the dream of somebody that one day decided to explore every single stop on Beijing's local subway. Together with opportunities ranging from the internships at the most prestigious companies in the country to involvement at Catherine B. Reynolds program for social entrepreneurship, the experience is a merging of institution and city to create a unique integration that smoothly transitions classroom to the real world.

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this is really, really good! very descriptive, yet concise. (:

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Good and concise with little specifics to show that you know about NYU. : )

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