Hello all. This is my supplemental essay under Boston College, and I would like some feedback for my rough draft so my application can be submitted real soon. Thank you.
1. Human beings have a creative side that tends to shine most when we are truly invested in the world around us. Describe a situation when you responded effectively to a particular need and found yourself at your creative best. (400 word-limit)
I peeked once more through the blinds, holding them open with my thumb and index finger. Gazing out onto the eastern Albany horizon blanketed with the emanating luster of the constellations under Grandma's barn, I would enjoy looking at them and learning something new about them. Since I first encountered the constellations, my curiosity in the sciences proliferates to this day and beyond.
My nine-year-old self would wonder how a cannon would make a ball blast off into a parabola motion depending on the angle, or how the universe expands, or anything that has to do with the laws of nature. At an early age, I enjoyed reading science articles, from whether or not time traveling would exist to a possibility of having a human community on Mars. From that moment, I just could not forget about excitement filling me while revealing the truth hidden by nature behind everyday affairs. We, humans, are curious creatures, and Physics is a way that I can express how the Laws work these days. Once I got into Physics, learning gives me tremendous admiration for the subject.
But, the only problem about my passion for Physics is this: "Why do you love science? God created everybody and everything. You're an atheist you don't like God" Grandma would say. I crumble my hard work and articles in frustration when I first heard those words. I would cry in my bed one night while the constellations look at me with sympathy. One morning I looked at my Grandma with contempt, but I still love her. I looked at her with a gentle look and said: "Yes, God created everything. God is all good and all powerful, and he created science as a way to learn how he created everything. I love science because it is a way for me to communicate with God with the laws of motion and exploration in many dimensions. Therefore, I don't hate God Nana. . ." Grandma barely understood half of what I said since Albanian is her native language, but she understood my point of the argument. After that, I received the warmest hug from her, and she made me my favorite chocolate pancakes while I watch the Discovery Channel. Science and God have the same sublimity in my heart and God gave me a reason for who I am. I feel that God gave me a genuine and creative connection with myself and Physics. For that, I love nobody more than my family and God.
In my heart, I am a physicist who loves God, and he and Boston College are my positive deceleration parameter that can accelerate my dreams into a reality as picturesque as the constellations in the sky.
If you read this far thank you for reading it. Although I'm proud of my essay, I believe that I'm missing something else very meaningful between me and God that I find hard to express. Please help!
1. Human beings have a creative side that tends to shine most when we are truly invested in the world around us. Describe a situation when you responded effectively to a particular need and found yourself at your creative best. (400 word-limit)
I peeked once more through the blinds, holding them open with my thumb and index finger. Gazing out onto the eastern Albany horizon blanketed with the emanating luster of the constellations under Grandma's barn, I would enjoy looking at them and learning something new about them. Since I first encountered the constellations, my curiosity in the sciences proliferates to this day and beyond.
My nine-year-old self would wonder how a cannon would make a ball blast off into a parabola motion depending on the angle, or how the universe expands, or anything that has to do with the laws of nature. At an early age, I enjoyed reading science articles, from whether or not time traveling would exist to a possibility of having a human community on Mars. From that moment, I just could not forget about excitement filling me while revealing the truth hidden by nature behind everyday affairs. We, humans, are curious creatures, and Physics is a way that I can express how the Laws work these days. Once I got into Physics, learning gives me tremendous admiration for the subject.
But, the only problem about my passion for Physics is this: "Why do you love science? God created everybody and everything. You're an atheist you don't like God" Grandma would say. I crumble my hard work and articles in frustration when I first heard those words. I would cry in my bed one night while the constellations look at me with sympathy. One morning I looked at my Grandma with contempt, but I still love her. I looked at her with a gentle look and said: "Yes, God created everything. God is all good and all powerful, and he created science as a way to learn how he created everything. I love science because it is a way for me to communicate with God with the laws of motion and exploration in many dimensions. Therefore, I don't hate God Nana. . ." Grandma barely understood half of what I said since Albanian is her native language, but she understood my point of the argument. After that, I received the warmest hug from her, and she made me my favorite chocolate pancakes while I watch the Discovery Channel. Science and God have the same sublimity in my heart and God gave me a reason for who I am. I feel that God gave me a genuine and creative connection with myself and Physics. For that, I love nobody more than my family and God.
In my heart, I am a physicist who loves God, and he and Boston College are my positive deceleration parameter that can accelerate my dreams into a reality as picturesque as the constellations in the sky.
If you read this far thank you for reading it. Although I'm proud of my essay, I believe that I'm missing something else very meaningful between me and God that I find hard to express. Please help!