Why do you choose Boston University - BU prompt; strong connection and bond with this school

Please give me some advice on this essay

Boston University application

Choosing the right college is one of the most difficult decision in one's life. I regard I have a strong connection and great bond with Boston University.

Because I intend to pursue a career in engineering, I see myself as a member of the Society of Women Engineers. Being a part of that society can help me expand my horizons and realize all my goals at finding the right path to my future career.

Boston University is characterized by its diversity. I strongly believe that different nationalities and variety of cultures can bring people together creating infectious school spirit. As a Polish immigrant I am excited to share my cultural experience while at the same time learning about others.

Boston University has a unique and long history that makes it special. Studying at one of the most prestigious universities in the United States would best prepare me for the future. As a future college student I find Boston University as a perfect place for developing my curiosity of knowledge. I believe Boston University would give me the best opportunities to realize my interest in engineering. Being taught by highly qualified and experienced faculty in the United States would best allow me to acquire knowledge. I believe Boston University will have a great impact on my life transforming me into a better person.

Marta, you have written a lot of generic information in this response that does not tell the reviewer that you actually know the reason why you chose to apply to Boston University. You are not properly representing what the reviewer will be looking for, which is a familiarity with the course curriculum, learning opportunities, and similarities between your learning objectives and the university mission and vision or teaching objectives. You got one portion of the essay right, the mention of the Society of Women Engineers. That is an organization at the university that ties in with your course major. However, the reasons beyond the ordinary descriptions easily found using a web search or on the website of the university will not make your decision to study at BU stand out. Think about your special academic and social interests that can be represented by various organizations, activities, or classes at the university. You need to do some research either through related student blogs, university YT videos, or other sources that will help you develop a response that will best suit and respond to your academic and social needs while you are a student at BU.