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Common App. Short Essay for Activitity Cross Country



alannis 1 / -  
Nov 22, 2009   #1
Please feel free to point out mistakes and give criticism, your help will be greatly appreciated!!! Thank you!

Last year, as a foreign exchange student, I joined the cross country team. It was both a struggle and a joy. As it turned out, cross country was the hardest sport in the season due to the great amount of training. I struggled with running for four miles every day plus hills and lifting every once a while. Though with a tired body and mind coming home, I decided staying on the team was worth it. Holding my enthusiasm, I learned to enjoy the sport. Soft breezes and vigorous trees companied me continuously and cheered me up. Improved results of meeting one after another provided me increasing confidence. I appreciated the experience of cross country, and the motto "push it to the limits" will encourage me to keep stepping forward, both on the track and off.

sofiaz 2 / 4  
Nov 22, 2009   #2
I am not so sure what you suppose to answer because I don't know the prompt,
maybe add some more details of what you learn beside just "learned to enjoy the sport".
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Nov 24, 2009   #3
I struggled with running for four miles every day, including hills, and lifting weights e very once a while.

Vigorous is not a god word to describe a tree.

Soft breezes and vigorous a corridor of tr ees acompanied me continuously and cheered me up.


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