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Please comment on my common app short answer. Your help in this busy time will be greatly appreciated!!!
I peer into my opponent's eyes through the metal bars of my armor. The world becomes silent. My grip on my bamboo sword tightens-I am ready. With a daring scream, I charge.
Apart from regularly attending my school kendo club, I also used to train at a kendo academy outside school. Twice a week, I would put on my armor and duel with other senior members. They were mostly males, all tall and skilled. Compared to them, I was an amateur. However, when I encountered them in our duels, I discarded mundane concerns. Instead, I focused on my target. My body and mind were directed towards a single purpose. My opponent was my goal, and I was going to give everything I had in this moment to strike and win. The art of concentration was what I learnt in this seemingly reckless exercise. It needs courage and determination to overcome fears and focus on a risky goal. And I had them.
Please comment on my common app short answer. Your help in this busy time will be greatly appreciated!!!
I peer into my opponent's eyes through the metal bars of my armor. The world becomes silent. My grip on my bamboo sword tightens-I am ready. With a daring scream, I charge.
Apart from regularly attending my school kendo club, I also used to train at a kendo academy outside school. Twice a week, I would put on my armor and duel with other senior members. They were mostly males, all tall and skilled. Compared to them, I was an amateur. However, when I encountered them in our duels, I discarded mundane concerns. Instead, I focused on my target. My body and mind were directed towards a single purpose. My opponent was my goal, and I was going to give everything I had in this moment to strike and win. The art of concentration was what I learnt in this seemingly reckless exercise. It needs courage and determination to overcome fears and focus on a risky goal. And I had them.