Prompt:Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum).
Growing up in a close-knit family with privileges, I viewed the world to be very different. The life for me was about studying really hard, achieving better grades, reading favourite novels at night and playing blithely with friends yet I was unaware of the harsh realities and difficulties of outside world. My consciousness was shaken in 2005 October when an earth quake destroyed many happy lives, turned beautiful cities and towns in to flatten and wrecked debris, of course it was very sorrowful for me at that time. I joined a non- profit organization just at the age of 11 to help the sufferers. During all this time I closely observed the vigour and patience of our people; it was not only inspiring but also heart breaking. Their courage and hope had a great impact on my personality and belief. Now I believe that world is like a teacher, caring and loving but strict when giving lessons those who take it for granted suffer while those who learn it by heart always succeed.
Please help me with it..look for grammatical errors.
Growing up in a close-knit family with privileges, I viewed the world to be very different. The life for me was about studying really hard, achieving better grades, reading favourite novels at night and playing blithely with friends yet I was unaware of the harsh realities and difficulties of outside world. My consciousness was shaken in 2005 October when an earth quake destroyed many happy lives, turned beautiful cities and towns in to flatten and wrecked debris, of course it was very sorrowful for me at that time. I joined a non- profit organization just at the age of 11 to help the sufferers. During all this time I closely observed the vigour and patience of our people; it was not only inspiring but also heart breaking. Their courage and hope had a great impact on my personality and belief. Now I believe that world is like a teacher, caring and loving but strict when giving lessons those who take it for granted suffer while those who learn it by heart always succeed.
Please help me with it..look for grammatical errors.