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I have always been inspired by the legendary hero- Lionel Messi. He plans ahead, works hard and give the best shot in any situation to achieve victory. Once he suffered from growth deficiency hormone and people thought he could not play anymore but he proved anything can be achieved if intent to do and willingness to learn is there. He is hardworking team player and has helped team to win many different trophies. His sacrifices and hard work have helped him win different individual accolades and be the best player in the world.
Messi is my model for getting the point I want in my life. I see how he approaches his destination and take a similar approach in my life to move ahead. His success inspires me to get my dreams fulfilled and gives me motivation to move ahead. It gives me pleasure watching him playing in the pitch- he often makes my life exciting. His friendly, kind and co-operative qualities are worth copying. Like him, I try my best to get success on every moves. I look myself as determined, hardworking and ready to take any kinds of commitments or challenges. I have realized success needs sweat and sacrifices and am looking forward to the day when I stand as a successful individual like my hero.
250 words limit.
I have always been inspired by the legendary hero- Lionel Messi. He plans ahead, works hard and give the best shot in any situation to achieve victory. Once he suffered from growth deficiency hormone and people thought he could not play anymore but he proved anything can be achieved if intent to do and willingness to learn is there. He is hardworking team player and has helped team to win many different trophies. His sacrifices and hard work have helped him win different individual accolades and be the best player in the world.
Messi is my model for getting the point I want in my life. I see how he approaches his destination and take a similar approach in my life to move ahead. His success inspires me to get my dreams fulfilled and gives me motivation to move ahead. It gives me pleasure watching him playing in the pitch- he often makes my life exciting. His friendly, kind and co-operative qualities are worth copying. Like him, I try my best to get success on every moves. I look myself as determined, hardworking and ready to take any kinds of commitments or challenges. I have realized success needs sweat and sacrifices and am looking forward to the day when I stand as a successful individual like my hero.