Harry Potter & Magic Power ; Denison "significant book" Supp

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Briefly discuss a book you have read that had a significant impact on you. (1000 characters)

When I opened the first Harry Potter book reluctantly at the age of 11, I had no idea how everything would be changed in my life. Before that, I read most popular science books. Totally fascinated I immersed into the book unexpectedly. I could read it all day long as if I was enchanted by magic.

Not only a book, a vast world opened to me at that moment. After reading it, I found that novels are also a kind of interesting books. So I went to the library and picked up another book called Jane Eyre and thus began my reading journey as a literature lover. As I was so attracted to the magic world created in the book, I searched more about castles, swords and witch-hunting movement and found surprisingly the relationship to the medieval background. The finding aroused more curiosity. I discovered my passion in history and chose it as my major in 12th Grade. Moreover, remembering the magic power of words, I want to give others the same impact I was received. I am writhing my own fiction now.

Hi :) Nice job! I have written some suggestions underneath some selections from your essay, just some ideas to fix your wording :)

When I opened the first Harry Potter book reluctantly at the age of 11, I had no idea how everything would be changed in my life.

When I was 11, I was reluctant to begin reading the first Harry Potter novel. I had no idea how much this book would influence my future.

Before that, I read most popular science books. Totally fascinated I immersed into the book unexpectedly.
Earlier in my life, I had mainly read popular science books. As I read Harry Potter, I unexpectedly became immersed in the book.

Not only a book, a vast world opened to me at that moment.
It was not just a book, it was as if another world lay behind those pages.

After reading it, I found that novels are also a kind of interesting books.
This novel inspired me to continue reading similar books.

So I went to the library and picked up another book called Jane Eyre and thus began my reading journey as a literature lover.
I found a copy of Jane Eyre at the library, and continued my reading journey with a great love of literature.

As I was so attracted to the magic world created in the book, I searched more about castles, swords and witch-hunting movement and found surprisingly the relationship to the medieval background.

The magical world that the book revealed sparked my interest in other topics, such as medieval history. I could read forever about castles, swords and the witch-hunting movement.

The finding aroused more curiosity. I discovered that my passion wasinfor history and chose it as my major in 12th Grade. Moreover, remembering the magic power of words, I want to give others the same impact that I was received. I am writing my own fiction now.

the above comment is actually very helpful. she covered almost everything i wanted to say. you have a lot of grammatical errors. you might want to check it a few times before sending it. other than that the storyline is good. good luck.