Im trying to apply at the Ai-Miami International University of Art and Design.
The prompt is "why should you be admitted to the program of your choice at MIU?" and "How do you expect your education at MIU to help attain you career goal?"
It has to be 150 words, but I have 333.
I was wondering if the essay is good so far, do I need to make it shorter, do I need to add more detail in some areas? I need help!!!
For a long time, I have wanted to become a part of the world of fashion, the world where fascinating people unite and express themselves with a unique sense of style. Yet, I never knew what aspect of the industry I wanted to engage in. It was not until the beginning of my senior year that I found my answer. For one of my classes, we were assigned on a research project for a career of our choice. Without a doubt, I chose to stick with my interest in fashion, but I wanted to pick an unfamiliar career and learn more about it. That is when I discovered fashion buying.
It was as if that career had been laid out just for me. The description fit my exact hobbies and lifestyle. On my spare time, I love to sew, cut, and tailor clothing from my closet and/or fabric I purchase. I adore studying new and upcoming trends and incorporating them into my wardrobe. I also enjoy shopping for unique or unappealing clothing/material, then reconstructing it into something new. I am very organized, excellent at budgeting/planning, and know how to deal with stress and deadlines, just to name a few. I want to put my talents and skills into good use and get into the Fashion merchandising Bachelors of Arts Program at Ai-Miami International University of Art and Design.
I believe I should be admitted to the program because I am passionate about my interest and envision myself becoming a successful fashion buyer for a chic and trendy store such as Forever21, H&M, etc. With the experience and knowledge, I will also be able to own my own business and/or boutique in the future. The program demonstrates that it has the courses I need to excel to obtain my career goal, such as Retail marketing, Sales Promotion, Visual Merchandising, Consumer behavior, etc. I believe Ai-Miami will provide me with the tools I need in order to fulfill all my aspirations and goals as well as offer opportunities I was never aware of within the industry.
The prompt is "why should you be admitted to the program of your choice at MIU?" and "How do you expect your education at MIU to help attain you career goal?"
It has to be 150 words, but I have 333.
I was wondering if the essay is good so far, do I need to make it shorter, do I need to add more detail in some areas? I need help!!!
For a long time, I have wanted to become a part of the world of fashion, the world where fascinating people unite and express themselves with a unique sense of style. Yet, I never knew what aspect of the industry I wanted to engage in. It was not until the beginning of my senior year that I found my answer. For one of my classes, we were assigned on a research project for a career of our choice. Without a doubt, I chose to stick with my interest in fashion, but I wanted to pick an unfamiliar career and learn more about it. That is when I discovered fashion buying.
It was as if that career had been laid out just for me. The description fit my exact hobbies and lifestyle. On my spare time, I love to sew, cut, and tailor clothing from my closet and/or fabric I purchase. I adore studying new and upcoming trends and incorporating them into my wardrobe. I also enjoy shopping for unique or unappealing clothing/material, then reconstructing it into something new. I am very organized, excellent at budgeting/planning, and know how to deal with stress and deadlines, just to name a few. I want to put my talents and skills into good use and get into the Fashion merchandising Bachelors of Arts Program at Ai-Miami International University of Art and Design.
I believe I should be admitted to the program because I am passionate about my interest and envision myself becoming a successful fashion buyer for a chic and trendy store such as Forever21, H&M, etc. With the experience and knowledge, I will also be able to own my own business and/or boutique in the future. The program demonstrates that it has the courses I need to excel to obtain my career goal, such as Retail marketing, Sales Promotion, Visual Merchandising, Consumer behavior, etc. I believe Ai-Miami will provide me with the tools I need in order to fulfill all my aspirations and goals as well as offer opportunities I was never aware of within the industry.
