hi im new here and i just started my sat study. please gimme a advise i really dont know what i have to do plus im ged student i have probably more errors than others...
Many people believe that success only gives us benefits. However, I believe that success can lead us to disaster because success makes people arrogant, and arrogant leads people to make false step forward.
Success requires a lot of things such as, effort, time and endurance. Because successful people went through all things what challenge them, they will become conceited easy. When successful people become conceited, they will start to underestimate or mistreat people who didn't go through challenges that successful people had to face. Eventually, people who got mistreated will leave their successful one, and successful one will be isolated in society. How can people who got isolated by their around in society called as successful person? I think isolation and alienation by communities are the most disastrous situation in modern days.
Because successful people experienced hard challenges, while they were trying to be successful sometimes overestimate themselves. Successful people think themselves as they can succeed whatever that they want to be or to do, and they will start to expand their work in other fields without any knowledge that they need. Eventually, successful people's jobs as in different fields will be demolished or ruined because not only they didn't have any knowledge in that field, but also their self-overestimation, caused by their previous success, blinded themselves.
In addition, Success is not fully success if one had been successful without his or her contribution. Successful people who got on certain level by other's contribution or luck often ruin themselves as well because they don't even know what they need to know or how to control their fortune. Faulty success does get people on certain level, but people who did not put effort in their success will get a lot worse life than life that they had before after they get ruined, and I think that if people cannot even have their previous life back, being successful is just a leading way to disaster.
Success is the highest possible way to live happy or wealthy life, only if one can manages, thinks and be humble. Otherwise, success will destroy people's life in social and financial ways.
Many people believe that success only gives us benefits. However, I believe that success can lead us to disaster because success makes people arrogant, and arrogant leads people to make false step forward.
Success requires a lot of things such as, effort, time and endurance. Because successful people went through all things what challenge them, they will become conceited easy. When successful people become conceited, they will start to underestimate or mistreat people who didn't go through challenges that successful people had to face. Eventually, people who got mistreated will leave their successful one, and successful one will be isolated in society. How can people who got isolated by their around in society called as successful person? I think isolation and alienation by communities are the most disastrous situation in modern days.
Because successful people experienced hard challenges, while they were trying to be successful sometimes overestimate themselves. Successful people think themselves as they can succeed whatever that they want to be or to do, and they will start to expand their work in other fields without any knowledge that they need. Eventually, successful people's jobs as in different fields will be demolished or ruined because not only they didn't have any knowledge in that field, but also their self-overestimation, caused by their previous success, blinded themselves.
In addition, Success is not fully success if one had been successful without his or her contribution. Successful people who got on certain level by other's contribution or luck often ruin themselves as well because they don't even know what they need to know or how to control their fortune. Faulty success does get people on certain level, but people who did not put effort in their success will get a lot worse life than life that they had before after they get ruined, and I think that if people cannot even have their previous life back, being successful is just a leading way to disaster.
Success is the highest possible way to live happy or wealthy life, only if one can manages, thinks and be humble. Otherwise, success will destroy people's life in social and financial ways.
