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JHU- Supplement essay:" Life Through Calculated Bonds"



ladybbbb 2 / 4  
Jan 1, 2011   #1
It is due tonight so if somebody is willing to help I would be more then grateful

Johns Hopkins offers 50 majors across the schools of Arts and Sciences and Engineering. On this application, we ask you to identify one or two that you might like to pursue here. Why did you choose the way you did? If you are undecided, why didn't you choose?

"15.) The time for one cycle of periodic process is called the:
(A) Amplitude
(B) Wavelength
(C) Frequency
(D) Period "
It is Decemer, 31 and I am trying to finish my take home quiz in AP Physics before I go out to celebrate New Year. Winter Break is going by so fast and unfortunately I am not done with a lot of things. College applications are stressing me out and like it wasn't enough visually my room is a mess, there are papers all over the place. Determined to finish all supplements today I am about to start. I have only one essay question left for John Hopkins University so I am starting with this one. Simplified, the question is: "What would you like to major in and why?" I have the clear idea in my mind but not the inspiration to express it. So, I go back to my take home quiz and suddenly I am thinking:

"Life through calculations"- No, it need something more and abruptly next to me I see my other take home quiz for AP Chemistry." Life through calculated bonds"- I like this one, there are both physics and chemistry, my favorite subjects.

"Is life really some calculated connections usually happening spontaneously? Or is it a motion in more than one dimension? If I think about it, life starts as a physics problem and then goes on combined with chemistry. Before we came in this challenging world there are many steps we never thought about. We start with a one dimensional projectile since embryos. Then 9 months we grow with a constant velocity which means without acceleration. Things start to be more complicated, just like in physics. From day one in this universe we gain acceleration for the 4-5 upcoming years to be able to achieve the maximum speed towards success and progress. Now, we have the basics all we have to do is try to combine our knowledge. Here comes school the projectile motion with the relative velocity, where X and Y are our goals and efforts. Chemistry takes part in this process too; everything is about what attracts us, what we bond with. Reactions? Reactions are our circumstances, things we have to face or work with, to have a product, result and most of the time a feedback, accomplishment. Work and energy are our best friends most of the time. Personally, I love the love of conservation: What you give you earn back. How much work you do that many benefits you get; how much energy you spent that much joy you feel and how much reactants you put in that much of product you get. I can see it clear now, here is Physics, Chemistry and Life with an equal sign (=) between them."

My thoughts showed me how passionate I am about these two areas of science. I can not ask for a better reason than the one I just had "Life Through Calculated Bonds". It is a must to have these two majors part of me at least that is the way I see it even though circular motion with gravity is what comes after.

"(C) Period"-the right answer just like the different periods of time

Anonymoussenior 17 / 124  
Jan 1, 2011   #2
It is December31st, and
my take home quiz in AP Physics quiz before going out to celebrate the New year.

I would recommend changing the date you mentioned so it does not sound like you waited until the day before to do your essay.

Determined to finish all supplements today I am about to start- you did not finish your thought

I have only one essay question left for John Hopkins University so I am starting with this one. Simplified, the question is: "What would you like to major in and why?" - they know what the prompt is no need to restate it.

I don't really recommend writing your essay about writing the essay. You also don't spend enought time answering the prompt your are mainly just telling a story.
OP ladybbbb 2 / 4  
Jan 1, 2011   #3
Thanks I really should consider that.
lapetitecygne 7 / 16  
Jan 1, 2011   #4
the goal is to answer the prompt, but i only see a little bit of that. also remember, the word limit is only 200-250! this is way over that!
Metrol 2 / 11  
Jan 1, 2011   #5
Actually, I think the essay is fine as it is now. It's well thought and it makes whole lot of sense except that it sounds a little too mechanical (as in simplifying human life too much). But I think it illustrates whole lot about the relationship between effort and outcome that comes after it.

Overall, it's solid.


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