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"left and right brain side' - stanford essay - intellectual vitality



runner57 3 / 9  
Dec 29, 2011   #1
Hi! Here's my essay for the stanford question: Stanford students possess an intellectual vitality. Reflect on an idea or experience that has been important to your intellectual development.

It makes sense in my head but I don't know if I really got the point across so any advice would be great! Thanks.

My mind is in a constant battle between the right side of my brain and the left. The artist in me comes out when I have a paint brush in hand. I fell in love with art at a young age, obsessed with design and self expression. On the other side, math has always fascinated me to no end. I have a knack for numbers and patterns, and I love the way everything seems to be interconnected. Along with my love for math and solving problems came my love for puzzles. I would spend weeks upon weeks putting puzzles together. I bought out every variety from the store. I stacked them. I timed myself and took them apart and put them together again. And then one day I did a puzzle upside down. I saw it as a challenge, I was fascinated by the shapes, the way everything fit together, the prospect of creating something from nothing. When I put that puzzle together, cardboard side up, it wasn't the same. It hit me that, as much as I loved the shapes of the pieces and putting them together, half the fun of puzzles was seeing the picture it created in the end. I went from thinking that art and math had nothing to do with each other to seeing that they had everything to do with each other. From then on I was obsessed. I saw the unique relationship between art and math everywhere ï in beautiful patterns and abstract paintings. I read about it and researched it, intrigued by things like the Egyptian pyramids, the golden ratio, and everything geometrical. Math is beautiful, art is beautiful, and I see infinite possibilities in the realm of art and math.

Prettywings 1 / 74  
Dec 29, 2011   #2
I fell in love with art at a young age, obsessed with design and self expression.

I'd leave this sentence out, it seems to interrupt the fluidity of your essay. But I enjoyed reading your essay and especially enjoyed how you bridged math and art together.
sailorb111 3 / 9  
Dec 29, 2011   #3
other. From then on I was obsessed. I saw the unique relationship

maybe use another word for obsessed. already used it, dont wanna seem obsessed with the word ;). i agree with runner57
fishie21 3 / 17  
Dec 29, 2011   #4
brief and very well written! it is crafty and obviously the work of a passionate artist! good luck :)
OP runner57 3 / 9  
Dec 29, 2011   #5
thanks guys! :)

does anyone else have anything to critique?! i would appreciate it so much


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