"Life of Pi" by Yann Martel, Short Answer - your most recent summer vacation

In addition to any work you listed above, please tell us how you spent your most recent summer vacation.
Limit your response to 4 lines.

This past summer, I read one of my favorite books; "Life of Pi" by Yann Martel. After yelling my throat dry on roller coasters at Six Flags, a road trip to Chicago came next. There, I enjoyed fun-filled days with ten cousins. We laughed at our embarrassing moments on ancient home videos, and ran around, dripping wet after water fights.

This past summer, I read one of my favorite books;, "Life of Pi" by Yann Martel. After yelling my throat dry on roller coasters at Six Flags, I went on a road trip to Chicago came next. There,While in Chicago, I enjoyed fun-filled days with my ten cousins. We laughed at our embarrassing moments captured on ancient home videos, andthen we proceeded to create new ones, as we ran around, dripping wet after water fights.

You don't have to use what I added on your last sentence. I think you should cut out the running around part or try to make it blend somehow :p

Thanks!! :D