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I am a Spanish six-year Business Administration & Law student currently studying in the Fisher College of Business at The Ohio State University and have an expected graduation date of June, 2015.
My determination and drive to excel inside and outside the classroom have aided me to be close to achieve my degree with great results and also, to have been able to attend and succeed at other worldwide recognized institutions: my one-year exchange period at Regent's University London reinforced my passion for the international connections in business and finance as well as helping me in further increasing my interpersonal and communication skills. My desire to keep improving academically and enhancing my multicultural competency made me apply to The Ohio State University, where I am currently coursing my sixth and last year of my degree, obtaining great results on my first semester and willing to keep it up.
I have also spent two summer courses in Germany (06' & 07' obtaining an A2 CEFR German level diploma) and also Japan (13' & 14') adding valuable experiences to my international profile. Improving my German language skills after my graduation is one of my short term goals
I am primarily interested in an analyst position to start off a successful career upon my graduation in June, a position where I can keep on expanding the knowledge acquired on the areas I have focused on the most: management and international finance, while gaining valuable work experiences. Your time and consideration are appreciated.
Gracias,
Juan
I am a Spanish six-year Business Administration & Law student currently studying in the Fisher College of Business at The Ohio State University and have an expected graduation date of June, 2015.
My determination and drive to excel inside and outside the classroom have aided me to be close to achieve my degree with great results and also, to have been able to attend and succeed at other worldwide recognized institutions: my one-year exchange period at Regent's University London reinforced my passion for the international connections in business and finance as well as helping me in further increasing my interpersonal and communication skills. My desire to keep improving academically and enhancing my multicultural competency made me apply to The Ohio State University, where I am currently coursing my sixth and last year of my degree, obtaining great results on my first semester and willing to keep it up.
I have also spent two summer courses in Germany (06' & 07' obtaining an A2 CEFR German level diploma) and also Japan (13' & 14') adding valuable experiences to my international profile. Improving my German language skills after my graduation is one of my short term goals
I am primarily interested in an analyst position to start off a successful career upon my graduation in June, a position where I can keep on expanding the knowledge acquired on the areas I have focused on the most: management and international finance, while gaining valuable work experiences. Your time and consideration are appreciated.
Gracias,
Juan