Why Northwestern? Social Policy Program

Northwestern Statement: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified? (250 words)

An exhaustive, protracted college search has led me to the following conclusion: Northwestern's Social Policy Program is the only undergraduate major in the nation that synthesizes all academic fields relevant to the improvement of human society. There exists no college-level program better suited to enable me to achieve my goal of becoming a pioneer of stronger, more comprehensive social programs for underserved immigrant and refugee communities in the United States. I am confident that the School of Education and Social Policy's intimate advising, discussion-based classes, and required practicums will allow me to build upon my work with impoverished communities in both academic and applied settings and prepare me for a life lived in the pursuit of societal betterment.

The fact that Northwestern offers the "best of both worlds" has largely prompted my application for admissions; Its students have access to both small classes and a vibrant college town, while also enjoying the opportunities that both a large-sized research university and the city of Chicago have to offer. Additionally, I am drawn to Northwestern's uniquely driven student body, which maintains a rich culture of activism and involvement that is readily identifiable on the campus and greater college community. Service opportunities presented by student groups such as LIFT-Chicago will allow me to expand upon my commitment to community-based work and gain practical experience that links into my long-term career goals. In 2018, I hope to enter the world with a Northwestern diploma in-hand. I am confident that there is nowhere it will be unable to take me.

Overall a very solid essay! I like how you were very specific and ended with a looking-forwards attitude. There are just a few awkward phrases or word choices that I might change..

There exists no college-level program better suited to enable me to achieve my goal of becoming a pioneer of stronger, more comprehensive social programs for underserved immigrant and refugee communities in the United States. This line is a bit confusing. I understood your point but only after reading it a second time.. but who knows, maybe it was just me

also "large-sized", "uniquely driven student body", "community-based work", and the very last sentence struck me as a tad bit awkward.. Maybe rephrase "I am confident that there is nowhere it will be unable to take me." to be "I am confident that it will open all doors for me" or something. Otherwise it sounds great

A great why essay. One problem though: Can you add more things about yourself? You need to also show the school that you are a good match to it.

This is a great essay, and in the short word limit you addressed most of the prompt. But like qian said, include why you're a good fit, that'll make it that much better.