This is my supplement for NYU and I am feeling iffy about it. Any suggestions? Please help!
Smack dab in the roar of one of the world's greatest cities, NYU is the perfect institution for a student who lives for the fast-paced motion of a city without having to compromise key elements, such as a variety of people and a myriad of opportunities that only a city offers. The ambience of its location seamlessly translates into NYU's inner core, which consists of a notable student to faculty ratio and an array of courses ranging from 'classical mythology' to 'Food Photography'. As someone who is applying undecided to NYU, the academic opportunities offered within any of the colleges creates a sense of reassurance within me about enrolling. I am certain that NYU will aid me in discovering what my calling is. I will, without a doubt, take advantage of the numerous courses, especially the witty and the 'not-so traditional' ones. I know I will procure a cosmopolitan and cultivated education at NYU; helping me determine what my true interests are - making the endeavor worth the while.
Lastly, NYU is known for sending the most amounts of students abroad; more than any other American university, something that is of great importance to me. The program in Paris is one that I am interested in. I enjoy learning about the French norm, its culture and its striking language, and I would like to extend my French studies far beyond high school. One can say that NYU is the perfect package, and most, if not all, people will agree, which is why I believe NYU is the academic match for me.
Smack dab in the roar of one of the world's greatest cities, NYU is the perfect institution for a student who lives for the fast-paced motion of a city without having to compromise key elements, such as a variety of people and a myriad of opportunities that only a city offers. The ambience of its location seamlessly translates into NYU's inner core, which consists of a notable student to faculty ratio and an array of courses ranging from 'classical mythology' to 'Food Photography'. As someone who is applying undecided to NYU, the academic opportunities offered within any of the colleges creates a sense of reassurance within me about enrolling. I am certain that NYU will aid me in discovering what my calling is. I will, without a doubt, take advantage of the numerous courses, especially the witty and the 'not-so traditional' ones. I know I will procure a cosmopolitan and cultivated education at NYU; helping me determine what my true interests are - making the endeavor worth the while.
Lastly, NYU is known for sending the most amounts of students abroad; more than any other American university, something that is of great importance to me. The program in Paris is one that I am interested in. I enjoy learning about the French norm, its culture and its striking language, and I would like to extend my French studies far beyond high school. One can say that NYU is the perfect package, and most, if not all, people will agree, which is why I believe NYU is the academic match for me.