I know it lacks focus but I dont know how to cram an entire summertime of events into 500 characters. My stepfather and my mother divorced over the summer too, but I didn't think I should add that in because its somewhat depressing and its a long story. Any suggestions? criticism, help, really would be appreciated. Its due in 2 hours. @o@
To kick off my summer vacation I went to Las Vegas the city of lights with my mother. Upon returning home, I took a BCIS course at Lamar High School because i wanted more space for art in my senior year schedule and continued my weekend art lessons. Soon after, I went on a trip with my father to new york, where I met my younger half brother for the first time and spent quality time with some relatives on a road trip covering much of the northeastern coast.
To kick off my summer vacation I went to Las Vegas the city of lights with my mother. Upon returning home, I took a BCIS course at Lamar High School because i wanted more space for art in my senior year schedule and continued my weekend art lessons. Soon after, I went on a trip with my father to new york, where I met my younger half brother for the first time and spent quality time with some relatives on a road trip covering much of the northeastern coast.