Open curriculum; Rochester supp; Why Rochester?

Why Rochester?

I am considering applying to this university mainly because of the open curriculum.The main reason that I am so drawn into this aspect of the university is because taking classes that I have interest in will make my time more worthwhile, interesting and meaningful in my quest for a college degree. I will have the to opportunity to explore courses that I would not normally approach such as sign language and engineering.With an open curriculum, it will allow me to manage my classes and therefore guide me to become a more independent individual.

"Ever better"

I am having a hard time undertanding the topic.please help!

the second one talk about something you improved in mine i talked about how i improved as a representative for students by becoming president of student council

your why rochester is good

ahhhh thank you soooo much ! it is crunch time. D;

okay other than the suggestions that you suggested, do you think that I should add anything more?! Thank you. :)

what do you mean by use an active voice?!