prompt: Stanford students possess an intellectual vitality. Reflect on an idea or experience that has been important to your intellectual development.
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Once in their life, every student curses his teacher for one or the other reason - lots of homework, teaching late, taking extra classes and the like. And I am no exception to this phenomena. But the summer of 2012, I learnt a widely unrecognized fact - teaching is not for weak hearted. It requires strength of warrior, determination of presidential candidate and love for what you teach. But more importantly, you gain a better understanding of your own knowledge. It is an intellectual roller coaster, one which I rode on when I mentored my fellow students on the different aspects of web development and machine learning, which I have been studying since my freshman year.
At the beginning of summer break, I decided to share my knowledge with my peers, thus setting up a class for the same. I got thirty registrations, much more than what I expected and so started the ride. As the track become steeper, I encountered my first inversion - one of the student asked me an insightful question about regression - which I wasn't able to answer. How much should we believe what we predict? Engrossed in the technicalities, I realized I have lost the real life implications of what I have studied. For days I pondered over the question, searching for answer in the formulae and academic texts, but to no avail. The experience was an eye opener, a discernment into the philosophy of science. Through the course of eight weeks, such experiences made me understand the subject much more clearly, much more deeply. I was a new person with a stronger grasp on my own knowledge, an intellectually developed person.
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please review this essay. I think It is right now a little haphazard. please help me make it smoother and interesting. Also, please point out any grammatical mistakes. Any help will be appreciated.
Once in their life, every student curses his teacher for one or the other reason - lots of homework, teaching late, taking extra classes and the like. And I am no exception to this phenomena. But the summer of 2012, I learnt a widely unrecognized fact - teaching is not for weak hearted. It requires strength of warrior, determination of presidential candidate and love for what you teach. But more importantly, you gain a better understanding of your own knowledge. It is an intellectual roller coaster, one which I rode on when I mentored my fellow students on the different aspects of web development and machine learning, which I have been studying since my freshman year.
At the beginning of summer break, I decided to share my knowledge with my peers, thus setting up a class for the same. I got thirty registrations, much more than what I expected and so started the ride. As the track become steeper, I encountered my first inversion - one of the student asked me an insightful question about regression - which I wasn't able to answer. How much should we believe what we predict? Engrossed in the technicalities, I realized I have lost the real life implications of what I have studied. For days I pondered over the question, searching for answer in the formulae and academic texts, but to no avail. The experience was an eye opener, a discernment into the philosophy of science. Through the course of eight weeks, such experiences made me understand the subject much more clearly, much more deeply. I was a new person with a stronger grasp on my own knowledge, an intellectually developed person.
I have 400 characters left , please suggest an interesting ending too.