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Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way.
Structure - Who? Why? What/ How?
There have been many people who have had significant influences on my life: people old and young; close-friends and strangers; people I dislike and people I love. Almost every person I have come across has had some influence on me in some way or another. I am who I am today because of the relationships I share with the people around me. One person who I feel really has made a major impact on my life, is my best friend, Pager. I see him as being a kind of savior of mine. He has saved me from becoming a depressing person who can't help but work themselves into the ground.
I remember when I met Pager four and a half years ago on my first day of boarding-school. We were both thirteen and were stood around in a circle with the rest of the boys whom we would be living with for the next five years. From that moment I knew Pager and I were going to be close friends. He had such a radiant and friendly persona, which seemed to ease everyone's nerves of starting boarding-school for the first time. It's this bubbly, confident and pleasantly sociable nature of his, which has had such a striking influence on me. Just like on that very first day I met him, he has always had the ability to calm the forever-built-up stress and nerves I acquire during the busy school term. It is in this way, that I see him being my savior - perhaps saving me from working myself to mental breakdown! In emulating his easygoing nature I have been able to flourish at high school.
I have now known Pager for four and a half years, and he has undoubtedly been my closest friend ever. We have lived with one another in the same boarding house since we first met, and have shared a deep passion for rowing, which has formed the bases of our friendship. He is the person who I feel knows me best outside of my family, (although I have long considered him as an actually brother to me!) He has had an influence on me solely because we are so close. Our fraternal relationship has meant I haven't failed to notice his approach to life - something I admire greatly. His light-heartedness and friendly nature has shown me that in order to enjoy school life, I need to relax from time to time, and see the fun side in what I do, opposed to getting depressed with every struggle I face.
Pager has defiantly made me a happier person, and has made my high school career extremely enjoyable. He has changed me forever; I am always ready to seek as much enjoyment as possible in whatever activity I do.
Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way.
Structure - Who? Why? What/ How?
There have been many people who have had significant influences on my life: people old and young; close-friends and strangers; people I dislike and people I love. Almost every person I have come across has had some influence on me in some way or another. I am who I am today because of the relationships I share with the people around me. One person who I feel really has made a major impact on my life, is my best friend, Pager. I see him as being a kind of savior of mine. He has saved me from becoming a depressing person who can't help but work themselves into the ground.
I remember when I met Pager four and a half years ago on my first day of boarding-school. We were both thirteen and were stood around in a circle with the rest of the boys whom we would be living with for the next five years. From that moment I knew Pager and I were going to be close friends. He had such a radiant and friendly persona, which seemed to ease everyone's nerves of starting boarding-school for the first time. It's this bubbly, confident and pleasantly sociable nature of his, which has had such a striking influence on me. Just like on that very first day I met him, he has always had the ability to calm the forever-built-up stress and nerves I acquire during the busy school term. It is in this way, that I see him being my savior - perhaps saving me from working myself to mental breakdown! In emulating his easygoing nature I have been able to flourish at high school.
I have now known Pager for four and a half years, and he has undoubtedly been my closest friend ever. We have lived with one another in the same boarding house since we first met, and have shared a deep passion for rowing, which has formed the bases of our friendship. He is the person who I feel knows me best outside of my family, (although I have long considered him as an actually brother to me!) He has had an influence on me solely because we are so close. Our fraternal relationship has meant I haven't failed to notice his approach to life - something I admire greatly. His light-heartedness and friendly nature has shown me that in order to enjoy school life, I need to relax from time to time, and see the fun side in what I do, opposed to getting depressed with every struggle I face.
Pager has defiantly made me a happier person, and has made my high school career extremely enjoyable. He has changed me forever; I am always ready to seek as much enjoyment as possible in whatever activity I do.
