Thanks so much for your suggestions!!
I am so embarrassed!! it should be the 3 DIMENSIONAL MOVIE, i did not realize it until a friend told me this morning...
there are some queries about your suggestions.
1,
Everyone has his/her own peculiarities, these peculiarities are affected under different condition to impart different influence to their subjects.This part will talk about how my negative features develop into positive ones.
This sentence is confusing and hard to read... You are trying to say: "Each person has their own unique qualities, which can easily influence other people; positively or negatively."
this was copy from my last statement, the original one is
"everybody came to this world as the same, except that they all had their own peculiarities. These peculiarities have no difference in terms of good or bad, they are affected under different condition to impart different influence to their subjects, therefore creating different people."
i wanna say, that one peculiarity/quality could be different(positive/negative) under different environments. (does it make sense to you? i am really weak on expression...especially in English...)
2.when you are saying this,
try not to state the obvious
you mean i should use specific stories instead of the "i am good/i am communicative" sentence, right?
THANX AGAIN!!