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Radiography: MCPHS Transfer Admission Essay



aaysha789 1 / 1  
May 4, 2010   #1
I am applying for transfer to a B.S. in Radiography at Massachusetts College of Pharmacy. The requirements are: a 500-word essay discussing your reasons for choosing the specific health care career you wish to pursue and why you are applying to MCPHS.

I have already received bachelor degree from India in Medical Technology and my PG in Radiology Imaging Technician. Radiography is very reliable career for me. I am very interested in radiography because, I like to help patients in the way that require us to see their different parts of bone, tissue, body brain in X-ray, sonography, CT scan, MRI, etc. it's seems very interesting for me and to know which disease they, have such as hemorrhage, infarction, and so forth. I have also work in Hospital in India for one year, as CT scan Technician.

After that I set my goal in radiography is the best career for me. When I came here to U.S.A, I research about many causes such as Pharmacy, Biotechnology, Medical assistance, and Dental hygiene but which I am interesting in Radiography which is the best part of life. Only bad thing is that physics is very intriguing to me, but anatomy and physiology is very interesting to me because we can know the different parts of the human body. Also we have radiation safety and hazard so we can know about the dose of radiation how is harmful and helpful to patients when we are applying the dose of radiation. There is a very good future in radiography but only negative feedback is radiation which is hazardous patient and technician, but in scanning patient we can see the inner part of brain and every part of body also. I had also operated the CT scan, MRI, ultrasound machine to know the disease happen to patient that's the right path for me. So I had transferred my credit in radiology so on the basis of that I get my transfer in MCPHS.

I have choose radiography because I know it very well and I have worked with it before, also I am interested in it and I also have to do master's in radiography from MCPHS because future is good. Technology is advancing day to day such as 6, 64 slice. So we can see 64 layers of brain in 1.5mm thickness. After I complete my associate degree in radiography I can do my pet scan or master's in radiography so I can know gain a deeper knowledge learns deeper about body parts. In radiography, to get rid of risk of radiation we can use told badge while doing procedures. From first part of my life I liked radiology very much and I am very happy that I get my transfer admission in my same goal. The future is very good for new machines are coming now days. We can know minor parts of the body and what is there inside. My reason is that for only applying in MCPHS is that I get my topmost educationas I want and when I attended a meeting with the counselor, she was good and understood my interest in radiography, and everyone involved was very cooperative to me .The counselor gets me the good guideline and showed me my future in radiography as well as about the subject and demand everywhere, and this seems nice to me. The faculty and campus is good and disciplinary. In MCPHS there is very good and advancing technology for radiography. I really feel MCPHS is my best career path for me. I surely believe that MCPH Swill give me my best education possible. My goal is to help people and get rid of them from disease and also communicate with people in my work.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
May 6, 2010   #2
I am very interested in radiography, because I like to help patients from get rid of diseases and to in the ways that require us to see their different parts of bone, tissue, body brain in X-ray, sonography, CT scan, MRI, etc.

It seems very interesting for me to know which disease they have, such as hemorrhage, infarctions, and so forth.

I have also work in...

In radiography, to get rid of risk of radiation we can use told badge or lead apron while doing procedures. ----I think you spend a little too muh time telling how you do the procedures and telling about the job. It is better if you write more about your specific plan for the future.

...want and when I attended a meeting with the counselor, she was good and understood my interest in radiography, and everyone involved was very cooperative with me.

Radiography is very reliable career for me.---- Are you sure you want to end by saying it is reliable? I think you should add a theme to the beginning and end of this essay, a theme that shows why you know that you can make a meaningful contribution in this field.

:-)
OP aaysha789 1 / 1  
May 9, 2010   #3
Thank you very much for edited @ EF_kevin. was bit busy, to get back. Here is i have update and i think this is best i can do. Please Edit if u can any suggest best for admission. Thanks a lot again. Have a nice day.


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