Most significant academic experience - "interviewing the mayor in your house"

describe your most significant academic experience

It is not an every day experience interviewing the mayor in your own house or seeing real-life impacts of your school project. These were the least expected outcomes of my year-long 'Senior Geography Project', a research task on a local issue of concern. I considered it as just another school assignment until mayor contacted me to tell me that improvements were being made at my local park due to the ideas raised in the project. I was stunned. This became more than school work, but a valuable life lesson that no matter how insignificant it may seem, one man can make an impact. One man, can change the world.

its only 100 words. Therefore, though it could be confusing, i didn't explain the school project itself because i don't think it was needed to support my argument. But if you think otherwise, plz let me know.

as always grammar check please!

and the ending - does it seem toooooo dramatic and overstated?

any suggestions are welcome! thanks a lot!
any help plz due today! thanks!

i beleive you should go into more detail on how these changes occured. Also, i think you should take out the "i can change the world", I think it sounds better ending with..

" ...how insignificant it may seem, one man can make an impact."

maybe end it like ".... how insignificant it may seem, one man can make an impact. One man, can change the world."

something like that. It also seems extremely short, is there a a minimum/maximum word count?