My teacher want paragraph about a good OR a bad childhood experience i had ,,

When I was about five years old. I was playing with my friends alot. I played until 11:00 am. And then go back into the house. My mother was angry with me so much. My mother was force me to sleep in the afternoon. But i didn't like to sleep in afternoon. TV channels were shut down at 1:00 pm and opens at 6:00 pm. I remember one day my mother forced me to sleep before 1:00 pm before closing the channel cartoons. And she slept with me to make sure I slapt or no. In fact I didn't a sleep but a wake. I waited my mother to sleep. Then crawl out from under the bed and open the door and go to watch cartoon channels. Sometimes she got up and she didn't see me on the bed. And she was a scream and get angry.

Nothings wrong with that, actually all kids (in your age) do the same.

When I was about five years old. I was playing(no full stop there)I used to play with my friendsalota lot. I usually played until 11:00 am. Andand then only I went homego back into the house. My mother was angry with me so much. My mother was force me to sleep in the afternoon.about this excessive playing and she forced me to sleep during the afternoon.

I remember one day my mother forced me to sleep before 1:00 pm before closing the channel cartoons. And she slept with me to make sure I slaptwould sleepor no . In fact I didn't a sleep but a wakekept myself awake and waited until my mother fell asleep.I waited my mother to sleep . Then crawled out from under the bed and opened the door and go to watched cartoonschannels.After sometimeSometimes she got up and she didn't see mefound me I have got out ofon the bed. And she was a screamed with angerand get angry.

I would just check your spelling and word tenses.

You should consistent with your past tense :)

and Then crawl out from under the bed and open the door and go to watch cartoon channels

You should put subject in your sentence. Then I crawled out