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'Topic done to death' - UC / personal quality



Enceladus 2 / 2  
Oct 29, 2013   #1
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

We had to do a group research paper. A trite and banal assignment on a topic done to death. Certainly no one would want to read it, but some distant bureaucracy deemed it necessary. Naturally, the division of work was uneven, but that was by choice. I intended to do most of it, because of my lack of respect for my colleagues and the desire to be dependable. I expected some effort on their part, but ultimately I wanted to carry the weight.The taste of responsibility and the satisfaction that it provides is appealing to me. Therefore, the majority of the task willingly fell to me.Soon, the paper was done and dusted and all we had to do was wait for the grade. When it came, I did not fare well with it, although it was probably a fair assessment. Nevertheless, my group couldn't complain as beggars can't be choosers. Moreover, pointing fingers is aimlessly pointless.Hence, in an effort to avoid becoming madder I simply prefer to take matter into my own hands.As a result, reliability is inherently a quality that I require of myself.

It is of major consequence to consent duty as one's name will never be consecrated. Accordingly, it's obligated for me by my own accord to accept and obtain responsibility. There is no greater honor than to be the pillar sitting pretty.Pride comes from being counted and relied on when others are plainly not. It is not a question of ability, but rather dependability.

gerelmaa 3 / 5  
Oct 31, 2013   #2
a group research paper, A is extra I think
dumi 1 / 6793  
Nov 5, 2013   #3
Therefore, the majority of the task willingly fell toon me
Well, throughout the response I had this one big concern.... Is this response describing you as a good team player? Being responsible and shouldering the burden are all good. But team spirit too is very important for college life. I feel you should consider this fact and change its tone to give the feeling that you did all that not to let down your team. Otherwise it looks like you grabbed all the responsibility to shine against others.


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