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Many college applicants think that they are all victims of the bureaucratic college process. The one that "contributes" the most to the community wins. No matter how irreverent, as long as a student has certain amount of hours, he or she becomes a strong candidate. This process turns students into robots and workplaces into sweatshops.
Unlike many others, I truly enjoy volunteering. I have volunteered over hundreds of hours as a teacher assistant at Pegasus Knowledge Circle. As a teacher assistant, I had many responsibilities. I had to grade test, homework, and many other paperwork. After grading them, I had to go over the questions the students got wrong . Because of my fluent Chinese, I often translated for the parents who do not speak English. The most challenging, yet meaningful duties of the job is making sure all the students fully interpret what they did wrong and not to make the same mistake ever again. I've learned many things from this job. I have improved my communication skill greatly. Before I've had the job, I could not even communicate with strangers at all. Now, I have became more outgoing and social.
Many college applicants think that they are all victims of the bureaucratic college process. The one that "contributes" the most to the community wins. No matter how irreverent, as long as a student has certain amount of hours, he or she becomes a strong candidate. This process turns students into robots and workplaces into sweatshops.
Unlike many others, I truly enjoy volunteering. I have volunteered over hundreds of hours as a teacher assistant at Pegasus Knowledge Circle. As a teacher assistant, I had many responsibilities. I had to grade test, homework, and many other paperwork. After grading them, I had to go over the questions the students got wrong . Because of my fluent Chinese, I often translated for the parents who do not speak English. The most challenging, yet meaningful duties of the job is making sure all the students fully interpret what they did wrong and not to make the same mistake ever again. I've learned many things from this job. I have improved my communication skill greatly. Before I've had the job, I could not even communicate with strangers at all. Now, I have became more outgoing and social.
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