UNC prompt: Stinsonitis

Prompt: It's easy to identify with the hero--the literary or historical figure who saves the day. Have you ever identified with a figure who wasn't a hero--a villain or a scapegoat, a bench-warmer or a bit player? If so, tell us why this figure appealed to you--and if your opinion changed over time, tell us about that, too.

It has to be approx. 250 words

Call him egotistical or a Casanova, Barney Stinson fits the mold. Known for his conceited role in the sitcom "How I Met Your Mother," Barney lives by his life philosophy of picking-up and dumping women, thus labeling him as a womanizer. After continuing to watch him persist for three years, I oddly came to admire Barney's approach on life.

Although I have no intentions of becoming a "womanizer," I did however learn through his routines that I should consider changing my life perspective. If someone described me in three words, without hesitation, he would reply with overanalyzing, meticulous, and to end in a lighter note, kind. I have the tendency in numerous situations to think ahead or look back and regret. Thus, I succeed in earning the title as "semi-party pooper." However, through observing Barney's nonchalance manner, I respect the risk he takes in digressing from living a systematic life to choosing to live life at full throttle. Gradually, I learned from him to take a less stringent outlook on life and to loosen up. Similar to Barney's theory of living with no regrets, I now bury most of my past situations and begin to dig up for what is to come. Although I continue to remain steadfast to my idiosyncrasies, I thank Barney for reminding me that life is ephemeral to continue to live by the rules. Now, I live by his few words, " You've been living your whole life in a seatbelt, its time to unclick."

and should there be a paragraph break anyway?

I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say on the first and second sentence of your second paragraph. For example:

"I did however learn through his routines on consider to make changes in my life." That may or may not have been intentional on your part. ;p

and

"If someone were asked to describe me in three words, without hesitation, he would reply with overanalyzing, meticulous, and to end in a lighter note, kind." Is the "he" you're referring to, Barney? (just to make sure)

Other than that, I enjoyed the whole concept, and the person you used. :)

thanks so much for your help, really. do you think it answer the prompt well, is it well written?

good choice of topic, but can you be more precise about why you started admire him? It's kinda not clear..

thank you so much for your feedback, i improved it a bit if you don't mind checking it out and commenting, grammar help would be great too.