kimku91 /
Dec 29, 2008 #1
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2) Rochester students represent many different points of view. Each student constructs an independent study and research plan. Describe what you will contribute to Rochester's diversity of ideas, experiences, and identities. If you can, incorporate a positive past experience where you chose your own learning path, or a negative experience where you wanted to exercise more independence.
To complete the picture puzzle, each piece needed to be put on the right place. I am like one of the pieces of Rochester puzzle. Without my piece of puzzle, it cannot be perfect. Because I am independent, I find my place without anyone's help. And because I am persevering, I don't give up until I find my part. But, just one's independence and perseverance cannot finish the picture. So, each individual's independence and perseverance has to gather together to cooperate in one place for the completeness. When everyone finds the place to be put, we can therefore have complete Rochester Puzzle. Although each piece of puzzle is from all different places, it harmonizes together with each unique characteristic. With my own unique independence and perseverance, I want to find my place in the University of Rochester.
-I was not sure if i was really answering the question.. Did i catch the point of the question?
*It will be pleasure to me if any experts can correct my grammers, styles of sentences. just revise my essay please. thank you :)
2) Rochester students represent many different points of view. Each student constructs an independent study and research plan. Describe what you will contribute to Rochester's diversity of ideas, experiences, and identities. If you can, incorporate a positive past experience where you chose your own learning path, or a negative experience where you wanted to exercise more independence.
To complete the picture puzzle, each piece needed to be put on the right place. I am like one of the pieces of Rochester puzzle. Without my piece of puzzle, it cannot be perfect. Because I am independent, I find my place without anyone's help. And because I am persevering, I don't give up until I find my part. But, just one's independence and perseverance cannot finish the picture. So, each individual's independence and perseverance has to gather together to cooperate in one place for the completeness. When everyone finds the place to be put, we can therefore have complete Rochester Puzzle. Although each piece of puzzle is from all different places, it harmonizes together with each unique characteristic. With my own unique independence and perseverance, I want to find my place in the University of Rochester.
-I was not sure if i was really answering the question.. Did i catch the point of the question?
*It will be pleasure to me if any experts can correct my grammers, styles of sentences. just revise my essay please. thank you :)
