In my tenure as class vice-president, I have experienced the importance of honest hard work. Through various opportunities to work with students, teachers, faculty and other members of my high school community, there has been no substitute for the investment. I've spent a good number of days going to school before dawn and leaving past dusk. Although I may lack Vitamin D, my time commitment has allowed me to fully devote myself to a cause I believe in. My locker is currently filled with Spirit Chains, markers, posterboard, scissors, and staplers. No, I'm not a fifth grader; I am the Vice-President of my class. To remain an organized and focused leader is my sole responsibility. This is not to say that I have not had help. Alongside other class officers and sponsors, I have established a legacy of commitment, hard work, and vigor. The experience has taught me that communication, teamwork, and a personal dedication can consistently help one prosper.
I know it's pretty weak, so are there any pointers on what I can do to strengthen it?
I know it's pretty weak, so are there any pointers on what I can do to strengthen it?