'not wasting lot of time attending classes' - I support of building a new high school near our home

It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support oppose this plan? Why?

Nowadays, education plays a pivotal role , when it comes to children and the rest of human beings. Furthermore, most of the kids have trouble with time management. Since, they tend to stay awake late at night and come late to classes. Furthermore, the sleeping process is really important for kids. Subsequently, having a high school nearby is beneficial because it can solve all above-mentioned problems. Therefore, I am joining the community in constructing a new high school.

Children are really bad at scheduling themselves. In fact, the majority of them adore to play online computer games or communicate with their friends through facebook at night and so on. Consequently, most of them have a tendency to late on classes. Obviously, it is an advantage for them to have a high school nearby. In addition, they can have more time to sleep.

In terms of sleeping, it is quite crucial for children. Sleeping process can make a huge impact on their learning process and its outcome. Since, without a real sleep, then you cannot comprehend all the knowledge that are given to you because of the sleepless. Moreover, it can cause badly on children health. For the reason that, if you will not have enough sleep continuously, then your overall performance in any aspect of your life will be diminishing little by little. Imagine, if you will be at school while you are sleepy. Your likely choice is going to be sleeping at the classes. Hence, how can you expect a good result from that action?. Even, if you will attempt to study as you usually do. However, your body will constantly remind you that you did not have a sufficient sleep last night. Thus, It will keep notifying you, until you satisfy your body needs.

It is because of the aforementioned reason that I firmly support of constructing a new high school. Since, it can facilitate children's timetable. Specifically, that construction will provide children with more sleep. In fact, sleeping is a significant process for any children alive.

- ...will be arriving for their classes on time... gain thetrust of others ...
- Vns, I am unclear as to how being on time for classes will build trust in others. I think this will instead build the time management skills of the children. Perhaps you should consider revising that statement?

- ... the school mightbe situated far from your... You can allow yourself to sleep...After all, having a good night's rest is pivotal to the learning process

- Vns, in this type of essay, you should choose only the most important reason or the best benefit for the student to discuss. In this case, it is the need for extra sleep time. Develop that paragraph with another statement mentioning the professional point of view about the importance of sleep to the learning process and then conclude.

There is a marked improvement in your essay thought process this time around. You have shown that you are capable of creating well thought out and semi-developed essay thoughts already. We just need to work on your reasoning skills :-)

Vangiespen, I wonder if it is ok to write 3 paragraphs essay

Vns, yes, you can write a 3 paragraph essay. That is the minimum paragraph count for any standard essay. Your minimum sentence count per paragraph is 3 sentences. Now some professors sometimes change the minimum sentence count per paragraph to 5. That count is really up to you. Just make sure you don't go below 3 lines per paragraph. In a TOEFL essay, 30 minutes will allow you write 3 paragraphs because you need to outline, draft, then revise, and finalize the essay. As a non-native speaker, 3 paragraphs should be more than sufficient to prove your English writing skills. However, if you are familiar with the topic and you feel you can write more paragraphs, then go for it. The more you can prove your understanding and knowledge of the given topic, the better off your TOEFL score will be :-)