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Activities - film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances



dreamfulcherry 1 / -  
Aug 7, 2025   #1
The line graph illustrates the numbers of participants joining the activities which are film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances at the social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020

Overall, for most of the period given film club had the most participants, while musical performances had the least. Amateur dramatics was the only activities to see a decrease in participants and Martials arts was unique in that the participants remained relatively stable over the period. The participants of all other activities increased during the years given.

Participants in Amateur dramatics had near 30 in 2000 but rapidly decreased to near 10 in 2020. Martials arts participants was steady around 40 for the whole period.

On the other hand, the participants in table tennis was rapidly increased from just near 20 in 2000 to near 60 in 2020. Likewise, musical performance also saw a rise form no one in 2005 to near 20 in 2020. For film club there was approximately 65 people joined in 2000 and remain nearly the same in 2020.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Aug 10, 2025   #2
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