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The amount of money which was given by city council and destined for members of books club



alfinkurnia 33 / 42  
Nov 19, 2016   #1
Sorry I can't show the picture, because this exercise question from book.

The graph ilustrates the amount of money has given by city council to member of books club over a four-year period. Overall, between first year and second year there was slight increase. After that, followed rose extremely in the next year. Finally, in fourth year dropped rapidly. The number of member from first year to second year fell slightly but increased gradually until fourth year.

As can be seen, The amount of money which has given from first year to second year increase by 2.500 and rose extremely from 25.000 in second year to 40.000 in third year but unfortunately fell to approximtely 35.000 in fourth year.

In comparison, the number of members between first year and second year also decrease slightly from 15.000 to about 15.000. Then, extreme rose by 10.000 in third year. In fourth year members peak at 30.000. In second year until third year, both of them were equal grown up extremely.

mardian24 46 / 60  
Nov 19, 2016   #2
Hi Alfinkurnia, let me give some comments

1. There are two spelling errors
ilustrates ----> illustrates
approximtely ----> approximately

2. ... of money has been given by city council ...
If you want to use passive sentence, you can use v + be + past participle

3. Overall, between the first year and second year ...
You have to use The + adjective/adverb to tell about superlative.

Thank you
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