Reading become more and more important for our life. Nowadays, we have a lot of material to read such as the internet, bookshops, libraries and so on. What is the benefits of reading? Reading can get information, entertainment, development reading skills, vocabulary expansion, mental stimulation, etc. We can read news on the internet, newspapers, or book, novels, which say about weather, histories, sport, countries... this help us expansion knowledge. The other way, we can feel happy and relaxed when we read the jokes, science books or ghost stories. I don't sure that the ghost stories make me happiness but for some people, it is really useful when they are bored. The other benefit of reading is vocabulary expansion . May be we don't know the way to expression about something, so we can read many kind of books what we like. And then, find suitable word. Hence, we can expand our vocabulary. Above I showed three benefits of reading. I think we should read everyday.
BENEFITS OF READING
Reading become more and more important for our life.
Reading has become more and more important for our lives.
reading becomes/ reading has become
Nowadays, we have a lot of material to read such as the internet Internet, bookshops, libraries and so on
The Internet, bookshops and libraries are not materials for reading but sources.
... this help us expansion knowledge.
This helps us expand our knowledge.
The other way, we can feel happy and relaxed when we read the jokes, science books or ghost stories.
On the other hand, books provide us with humor, excitement and entertainment.
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it seems good and have many ideas but I think if you make it in more one paragraph :)
I don't sure that the ghost stories make me happiness but for some people, it is really useful when they are bored. The other benefit of reading is vocabulary expansion . May be we don't know the way to expression about something, so we can read many kind of books what we like. And then, find suitable word. Hence, we can expand our vocabulary. Above I showed three benefits of reading. I think we should read everyday.
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I am not sure whether the ghost stories make me happy, but some people find them very exciting and an ideal way to keep them inspired when they are bored. The other benefit of reading is that it helps developing our vocabulary. Reading gives the best understanding as to how we should handle particular words to describe a particular situation.
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