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Essay about My Classmate from Cambodia



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Feb 4, 2010   #1
My Classmate's name is channy.His age about 30years old, he is Camboian, and live in a small village of Pourk Deistic Siem Reap, Cambodia.He's work in hotel but beside of the work, he study at University as my classmate. Event his house far from the school around 20km he still a student that come school regular time, very rarely that he had absence. he's got a family and kind person whom I Know.when he's in the class always says hello to every classmate and I expect to learn from him as well. Finally I am happy to have channy to be my classmate and I hope I could study with on the next semester.

conheomap 3 / 6  
Feb 5, 2010   #2
My c lassmate's name is C hanny. His age is about 30 years old.H e is Cambodian and living in a small village of Pourk Deistic Siem Reap, Cambodia. He's working in a hotel but besides of the work, he studies at University as my classmate. Even though his house is far from the school around 20Km, he still a student that come school regular time, very rarely that he had absence. He has a family and is a kind person whom I know. When I see him in the class, he always says hello to every classmates and I expect to learn from him as well. Finally I am happy to have Channy to be my classmate and I hope I could study with him on the next semester.

Well I'm no expert, but I hope I've helped. Good luck.
duke616 2 / 6  
Feb 5, 2010   #3
May I additional revise?

My classmate's name is Channy. His age is about 30 years old. He is a Cambodian and lives in a small village of Pourk Deistic Siem Reap, Cambodia.

He's working in the hotel. But, besides work, he studies at University as my classmate. Even though, his house is so far from the school around 20Km.

He is still a student who is an industrious student. He has a family. And, as I know him, he is a kind person.
For example, When I see him in the class, he always says hello to every classmates.
Moreover, I expect to learn from him. It's due to that he teach me, when I don't know questions.
Finally, If Channy is my classmate at next semester, I'll be happy.

Also I'm beginner in English,
However, I face to English.
If you don't give up, you can do it. include me... ;)
fighting!!
zahoora 1 / 6  
Feb 5, 2010   #4
he is 30 years old
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Feb 5, 2010   #5
Luong and Allen, great job here! Thanks for the excellent contributions you make to help others at EF.


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