The most creative literature value contents of the most beautiful American dreams and world dreams of the three world records could be felt and learned by our entire body soul, we should be vanguards in any kind of fields in the world such as the original political, economic, cultural, scientific, scholarly, artistic and athletic creation or challenging contribution etc. Because the world record holders had made three original creative controbutions in the field of the artictic cultural styles to the world. The three world music pinnacles had become the most excellent examples of how both the American cultures and the world cultures were exported to other regions all over the world, because the super world talent had found the better way to get rid of the limitations of the internet communication and transmission by the help of the "VPN" etc.
The most creative literature value contents of the body music were that we should be pioneers in as many areas as possible either for a nation or for a person, either for the world or for the country, either for the universe or for the earth, either for the sovereignty or for the human rights, either for the world peace or for the personal freedom etc. Because the world record holder had made a song on as many areas as possible of his body skins.
The most creative literature value contents of the two harmonic musics were that we should be leaders in at least two fields both for human rights and freedoms, both for happiness and rich, both for justice and fair, both for the universe and the earth, both for the world and for the country, both for the nation and for a person, both for the spirits and for the materials etc. Because the world record holder had simultaneously produced at least two different notes in at least two fields of his throat. The super world singer of the two world peaks had created the special no lyrics way to majorly sing the American spirits of both following and challenging world record champions, of both making after and throwing down traditions, of both adhering and flinging down authorities etc. Because the lyrics content of the American cultural spirits might not be welcomed by a certain culture due to the reason of the policy of the politic, the economy and the talent control etc.
The international honors and awards given by the global world record association were the professional identifications of the world records; The honors and awards were the most authoritative professional recognition of the world for the reason of both its no business-related aims and its serious professional council of reviews, because the business-aimed organizations would have no rights to reject the identifications; The contributive spirits of the world record organization had been highly praised in the three world pinnacles, because the largest no business-aimed professional open competition was the most real; Both the official an ambassador and a membership recognized by the international organization council had majorly exalted the most beautiful world dreams both in China and in the USA, because the no lyrics musical contents were so abstract that the cultural differences would have no effective way to review them, more importantly, the world cultures were welcomed by both countries.
Honors and awards given by both the governments and the international organizations should not have personal discriminations such as his or her nation, sex, age, culture, education, marriage, position, occupation, identity, property, color of skin, body figure, religious belief etc. Because the discriminations might burry the real super world star. The greatest open-minded culture spirits of both the UN and the USA had been highly praised in the three world peaks, because the most open-minded culture spirits had mostly encouraged the world real super talent to make creations.
The super world music inventors Xiulin Chang created the three no lyric music videos to highly praise the most creative literature values of the two dreams at website youtube.com/channel/UCBVak7ygWUBV4Wch7QQc_Qw The three world record holders Xiulin Chang had been being an ambassador and a membership of the RecordSetter world records refering to the website recordsetter.com/user/XiulinChang
You need to review your first paragraph. Your first sentence should be divided and turned into three sentences instead of just using commas to separate the statements. As an extremely long sentence, it becomes hard to read, understand, and keep track of. In an academic paper, you should never start a sentence with "Because" since the word connotes an explanation of a preceding thought. Also, who are the record holders? We need their names and the records that they hold in relation to your succeeding discussion of their accomplishments.
Try to vary your opening phrases for your first 3 paragraphs. Redundancy sets in when you have read "The most creative literature value contents" more than twice. It is not only boring to read but also highlights the problem of a limited vocabulary on your part. Something that is further spotlighted by your spelling errors throughout the paper.
Now, I have to say that the information in your paper is interesting to read. However, because the thesis statement of your discussion was not made clear, I am not sure about how to take the information that I have just read. What am I supposed to take away from this discussion and how am I expected to use the information you shared? Try to develop a clear thesis statement in order to respond to those points and present it at the end of you opening paragraph.
This article will display the original english word literature contents of the three world records, there was no any normal language word in the three music videos; The special literature version could also be converted into the art version of the three world records.The article was the original creative principle to produce the three world records. Informations about the three world record holders are at the bottom of this article.The literature contents were the most beautiful American dreams and world dreams of both the USA and the UN; The most creative literature value contents of the two dreams were below.
Firstly, we should be the world's original vanguards in any kind of field of the politics, economies, cultures, sciences, learnings, arts and sports etc. The three world record holders had made the three original creative contributions to the field of the artistic cultural styles to the world.The super world Khoomei singer had made the special articulation style of the "opening mouth" throat singing;The super world overtone singer had created the special articulation style of the "closing mouth" Khoomei; The super world body musician had set out the special skin sound on many areas of his body skins; There was no any hit on his skins.The three world music pinnacles had become the most excellent examples of how both the American cultures and the world cultures were exported to other regions all over the world,the three super world talents had found the better way to get rid of the limitations of the internet communication and transmission by the help of the "VPN" etc. The super world music inventors had created the three special no lyric videos to highly praise the American spirits of both following and challenging world record champions, of both making after and throwing down traditions, of both adhering and flinging down authorities etc. The lyric content of the American cultural spirits might not be welcomed by a certain culture due to the policy of the politics, the economies and the talent controls etc.
Secondly, we should be pioneers in as many areas as possible either for a nation or for a person, either for the world or for the country, either for the universe or for the earth, either for the sovereignty or for the human rights, either for the world peace or for the personal freedom etc. the body music world record holder had made a song on many areas of his body skins.
Finally, we should be leaders in at least two fields both for human rights and freedoms, both for happiness and rich, both for justice and fair, both for the universe and the earth, both for the world and for the country, both for the nation and for a person, both for the spirits and for the materials etc. The two throat singing world record holders had simultaneously produced the two different notes in two fields of his throat.
The super world both the Khoomei singer and the body musician Xiulin Chang had created the three special no lyric music videos to highly sing the most creative literature values of the most beautiful both American dreams of the USA and world dreams of the UN on the world's largest video website youtube.com/watch?v=P7Jsm_sMykk; youtube.com/watch?v=wDWfsKtSzl0; youtube.com/watch?v=A5Mgw3fZkik.The super world music man Xiulin Chang had been being the official ambassador of the RecordSetter world records since October 12, 2015; He had been being the official membership of the RecordSetter since July 21, 2015; He had been being the three world record holders for around three years. The one title of the two throat singing world records was the "Longest Nasal Breath By A Khoomei Singer" verified by the RecordSetter in The USA on August 18, 2015 at the official website recordsetter.com/world-record/nasal-breath-khoomei-singer/42890; The video had been created and displayed at Chinese major media CNTV on December 23, 2012 in Bei Jing city, China; The video had also been displaying as "2013 year Spring Festival Gala creativity network video showed by the CCTV"at official website of the artistic exhibitions wlchunwan.cntv.cn/2013/zhengji/changyi/index.shtml. The other title of the two Khoomei world records was the "Longest Single Breath By A Khoomei Singer" verified by the RecordSetter in The USA on July 21, 2015 at the official webiste recordsetter.com/world-record/single-breath-for-khoomei-singer/42439; The video had been created and displayed at Chinese major media CNTV on January 07,2013 in Bei Jing city, China at the official website xiyou.cntv.cn/p-20382-312fafc4-58a3-11e2-b140-a4badb469111.html. The third world record title was the "Longest Time Producing A Sound On Skin By A Khoomei Singer" tagged with "a body musician" verified by the RecordSetter on August 24, 2015 in The USA at the official website recordsetter.com/world-record/producing-sound-skin-khoomei-singer/43123; The video had been created and displayed at Chinese major media CNTV on March 17, 2013 in Bei Jing city, China at the official website i.56.com/u/r501463241. You can find more details at the official website of the RecordSetter below recordsetter.com/user/XiulinChang
What subject did you write this essay for? It seems to me that it is lacking a background discussion that will help the reader understand the discussion that was developed in the essay. If it is for music appreciation class, then I understand why there are subject specific terms that exist without an explanation. If it isn't then I believe tha tyou need to make reference to a backgrounder in the essay just to explain to people why this is an important topic and how it is relevant to the world of music, America, and the UN.
The grammar issues in this case, affect the way that you are trying to deliver your message to the reader. your lack of expertise, as this is not even medium level English use, makes the essay difficult to read, understand, and even guess when it comes to what you are trying to say. However, offering the reader a thorough introduction on the importance of the topic should be able to help resolve that situation.
Try to develop certain discussions a bit more because the topic is under developed. Topics such as the "pioneers in as many areas as possible either for a nation or for a person..." need to be threshed out in order to create a connected and relevant discussion on the page. With reference to the URL's that you included in the page, you need to remove those links. Unless you can embed the link in the title of the song or performance, pasting the whole URL just makes the paper more confusing and difficult to read. If you can't make it clickable, then there is no need to include the source video or file.
The three world record music appreciations would be expressed in literature value views, the original English word literature version contents of the three world records were the most beautiful American dreams of the USA and world dreams of the UN.
We'd better see the definition of both the overtone singing and the body music in order to better grasp the literature value points of the three world peaks.
What is an overtone singing? The overtone singing is at least two different tones sung in your throat at the same time. It is also called as either a throat singing, or a Khoomei, or a harmonic music sometimes; there are many overtone singing articulation styles in the world. There would be a closing moth throat singing and an opening mouth overtone singing according to a different breath way; there would be a high-pitched voice Khoomei, a middle pith overtone singing and a low sound harmonic music on the basis of a diverse pitch.
What is a human body music? A human body music is only from the most part of your body skins other than your breathing organs such as your eyes, noses, ears, a mouth, a belly button, an anus door, and a mouth of clitoris or penis; there is no any hit on your skins.
We'd better see some histories of the three world records in order to to gain a better understanding the literature values of their no lyric art values. The name of the three world record holders is at the bottom of this article. We will call the holder as "he" or "his" in the following article.
His first world record: The closing-moth Khoomei world record video had been displaying as the artistic exhibition for "2013 year Spring Festival Gala creativity network video showed by the CCTV"; the complete closing-moth throat singing was also called as a nose overtone singing sometimes. He was the original first person that created the nose throat singing in the world. He had made the most original artistic contribution of major significance to the field of the closing-mouth throat singing for the human beings.
His second world record: The opening-moth throat singing world record video had been published at Chinese major media CNTV on January 07,2013 in Bei Jing city, China; he was the first original person that outnumbered the several former world record holders by his low-pitched throat singing. He had made the most great original artistic contribution to the field of the opening-mouth throat singing by low voice overtone singing for the human beings.
His third world record: The human body music world record had been posting at Chinese major media CNTV on March 17, 2013 in Bei Jing city, China; he was the first original person that produced the longest time skin sound on the most areas of his body. He had created the most significant original artistic achievement in the field of the body music on his many skins for the human beings.
Let us review the purpose of creating the three world records in order to get the culture spirit points of the three pinnacles. He had made a policy plan to create the perfect world records that could get rid of the policy limitation of culture values, politics, economies, talent controls and internet interactions etc. He had designed the three world records to highly praise the perfect culture values of both the USA and the UN. In fact, the three world no lyric music peaks created by him had perfectly completed the policy plan. These were the most creative literature values of the special art values that the three world music peaks could freely spread the most beautiful American dreams and the united nation dreams in the singular no lyric way.
Right now, let us go to the point of this article: The most creative literature value contents of the two dreams were below.
Firstly, we should have been being the world's original vanguards in any kind of field of the politics, economies, cultures, sciences, learnings, arts and sports etc. The three world record holders had made the three original creative contributions to the field of the artistic cultural styles to the world. The super world Khoomei singer had made the unique "opening mouth" throat singing voices, the longest single breath Khoomei voices were so special that several people could not dare to believe that they were throat singing; the super world overtone singer had created the special original articulation style of the "closing mouth" Khoomei; the super world body musician had set out the unique original skin sound on many areas of his body; There was no any hit on his skins. The three world music pinnacles had become the most excellent examples of how both the American cultures and the world cultures were exported to other regions all over the world, the three super world talents had found the better way to get rid of the limitations of the internet communication and transmission by the help of the "VPN" and the no business-aimed world record competition stage website etc. The super world music inventors had created the three unique no lyric videos on the world largest video website Youtube to highly praise the American spirits of both following and challenging world record champions, of both making after and throwing down traditions, of both adhering and flinging down authorities etc. It was the first time that the three world records posted their literature values; It would be the first time that this article would publish the details of their literature values. The lyric culture contents of the American cultural spirits had to get rid of certain limitations of a certain culture due to the policy of the politics, the economies and the talent controls etc.
Secondly, we would have been being pioneers in as many areas as possible either for a nation or for a person, either for the world or for the country, either for the universe or for the earth, either for the sovereignty or for the human rights, either for the world peace or for the personal freedom etc. He had been being the body music world record holder for the skin song on many areas of his body. It would be the most perfect dreams of both the UN and the USA that all of the most beautiful flowers would have been blooming together for the world.
Finally, we should have been being leaders in at least two fields both for human rights and freedoms, both for happiness and rich, both for justice and fair, both for the universe and the earth, both for the world and for the country, both for the nation and for a person, both for the spirits and for the materials etc. He had been being the two throat singing world record holders for the two simultaneous different notes in two fields of his throat. He had created the diverse styles of a throat singing; many ways of an overtone singing accord with the diversity of the world cultures proposed by the UNESCO. It was the most ingenious literature values of both the UN charter and American culture spirits that we would have been being leaders together in all world fields.
Chinese man Xiulin chang was the three world record holders, he was the ambassador and the membership of RecordSetter, he was the super world Khoomei singer and the body musician, he was the three world record music inventors. His three world record titles were: "Longest Nasal Breath By A Khoomei Singer"; "Longest Single Breath By A Khoomei Singer"; "Longest Time Producing A Sound On Skin By A Khoomei Singer" tagged with "a body musician". You can find more details at the official website
recordsetter.com/user/XiulinChang
youtube.com/channel/UCBVak7ygWUBV4Wch7QQc_Qw
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