The diagram below explain the process of making wood pellets, used to heat building.

The diagram below explain the process of making wood pellets, used to heat building.

The diagram reveals the information of the process about how the wood pellets made. At first glance, it is evident that there are seven steps to make wood pellets used to head buildings.

First of all, sawdust arrives from sawmill and put this into fibers of inform length in a hammer mill. Then, the next process is that fibers are dampened with steam, and they are forced through holes in a pellet machine, forming into pellets.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the diagrams shows that the next stages is cooking pellets to the machine, and then lost dust is vacuumed off, thus resulting wood pellets. Before the wood pellets are ready for sale, wood pellets are packed into 18 kilo (40 pound bags), after this step, the product is ready for seal and wood pellets manufactured by this process are suitable for use to heat buildings such as pellet stoves and pellet furnaces.

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- The diagram reveals (the - DELETE) information of the process about how the wood pellets made.
- At first glance, it is evident that there are seven steps to make wood pellets used (USE) to head buildings.
- Moving to a more detailed analysis from the diagrams shows that the next stages is cooking pellets to the machine, and then lost(LOOSE) dust is vacuumed off, thus resulting wood pellets.

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The diagram reveals the information of the process about how the wood pellets made. At first glance, it is evident that there are seven steps to make wood pellets used to head buildings.

[The diagram illustrates the process of making wood pellets. It is clear that there are seven steps to make wood pellets, which starts with the arrival of sawdust from sawmills and ends with the packaging of pellets for sale.]

First of all, sawdust arrives from sawmill and put this into fibers of inform length in a hammer mill. Then, the next process is that fibers are dampened with steam, and they are forced through holes in a pellet machine, forming into pellets.

[To start, when sawdust arrives from sawmill, it is hammered in a hammer mill into fibers of the same length. The fibers are then moistened with steam. Afterwards, the fibers are introduced into holes in a pellet machine, as a result, pellets are formed. Next, the pellets are cooled and the loose dust are removed using a vacuum.]

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the diagrams shows that the next stages is cooking pellets to the machine, and then lost dust is vacuumed off, thus resulting wood pellets. Before the wood pellets are ready for sale, wood pellets are packed into 18 kilo (40 pound bags), after this step, the product is ready for seal and wood pellets manufactured by this process are suitable for use to heat buildings such as pellet stoves and pellet furnaces.

[Finally, pellets are packed into 40-lb bags before being sold.]

Note: This is only based on the attached diagram. You mentioned about pellet stoves and pellet furnaces (heat buildings), is that mentioned in the task? If it is, it would be appropriate to include it on the thread. Best of luck! :)