TED (What we can do to die well)

Timothy Ihrig says that the American way of life faces the threat which is health expenditures. The expenditures occupy 15 percent of the GDP in the United States of America, but health care system is located 37th within 50 countries and other nations rank higher than this country as far as quality and value. He suggests improving patient experience, the population health and decreasing per capita expenditure across a continuum. In another view, palliative medicine enables us to live as human beings and change for the better.

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Timothy Ihrig says SAID (this happens in the past, (...) faces the threat which is ABOUT health expenditures.
... in the United States of America, but A health care system is located ...
He suggests SUGGESTED improving A patient experience, ...

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Timothy Ihrig says that the American way of life ...
===> to make a good sentence, you need to use appositive.
eg. Timothy Ihrig, the speaker of TED talk video, the American way of life faces the threat which is health expenditures.

the American way of life faces the threat ...
===> the life style of American

health care system is located 37th
===> health care system is located at 37th

but health care system is located 37th within 50 countries ...
maybe what you try to say is :
===>the American health care system was ranked 37 out of 50 countries where the other country takes the higher place.

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