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Writing task 2: The environment.



Duekhanh 6 / 11  
Jun 14, 2025   #1
TOPIC: Some people believe that the environment cannot be solved without the action of individual. You agree or disagree?

In recent year, some people believe that the environment cannot be should without the action of individual. From my point of view, I agree with thisopinion because individual awareness is important to protect the environment.
First, build personal awareness. When people know how their actions affect the environment, they are more likely to chang their behavior. For example, people who understand that using less plastic is good for the earth. When many people use reusable bags and bottles, they an reduce plastic waste. This small change can make inspire others to do the same.
Second, goverment rules, like the " No littering" law, weak better when individuals help kepp their communities clean. When there is less trash on the streets and in parks. For example, when local fine people for littering, they usually see less trash. However, laws alone cannot solve everything. If people do not follow these rules or do not take care of their trash pollution will continue to harm people. That is why individual actions are very important to support goverment rules and show that everyone has a role in protecting the environment.
In conclusion, both individual actions and goverment rules are important solve environmental problems. By raising awereness and encouraging redpnsible behavior, we can work for a clean.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Jun 14, 2025   #2
The essay is under written. That means it does not meet the minimum word count number. By not writing 250 words, you are assured of an automatic failing score because there is not enough writing available for the examiner to properly assess your writing skills based upon the existing scoring rubic. As I review what you wrote, I also see that your grammar is not perfect. Your thought process probably affected the lack of clarity in the presentation. Your sentences are not complete sentences. The structure you use in this presentation does not meet the GRA requirements that could have helped you achieve a better score. This is fine for a first essay writing effort but, I would expect to see progress in your writing over the coming days.
Valentina25 1 / 5  
Jun 14, 2025   #3
I really liked the topic. We need to be much more aware.


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