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Find out the peripheral vision in sport



PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 17, 2016   #1
Sometime we simply tolerate the blur. It is important to pay attention to the blur that surrounds the point where we have focused our vision. Athletes, for example must be keenly aware of what is happening all around them. An athlete's performance not only depends on physic but also visual training ability.

On the other hand, the environment also contributes to athlete's visual sharpness such as contrasting court background, adequate lighting, and non-confusing uniform color combinations and less off-court motion. It is that caches the athlete's attention as they gather a quick view of focused on detail. As result the eyes move in and out of focus, there is a blur between each pause.

ryan31 65 / 89  
Sep 17, 2016   #2
hai pha
I think it is nice essay
I want to try examine your summary

I think you must using simple present
Sometimes we simply tolerate the blur.
... the point where we have focused our vision.
... be keenly aware of what is happening all around them. An athlete's performance is not only depends on ...

... gather a quick view of focused on detail. As the result, the eyes move in and out of focus, there is a blur between eachevery pause.

I think it is enough for me
keep writing n struggle friend
swr10 10 / 14  
Sep 17, 2016   #3
Hi pha-pha,

It is my suggestion for your nice summary:

Sometime weWe sometimes simply tolerate thea blur. It is important to pay attention to ...
Athletes, for example, must be keenly aware of what isare happening all around them.
... not only depends on physic, but also visual training ability.

On the other hand, thean environment also contributes to ...
It is that caches the athlete's attention ...
As the result, the eyes move in and out ...


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