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Five Sentence Chronological Paragraph. "Let me tell you how to make my favorite sandwich."



MaryMag96 2 / 3  
Nov 6, 2013   #1
My favorite sandwich is a ham and mayonnaise. Not only delectable but also easy to create, this masterpiece is perfect for lunch. First, grab two thick slices of sour dough bread and smother each piece with mayonnaise. Add a fresh leaf of green lettuce and top off with three slices of deli-ham. Finally, place the two slices of bread together and serve with a handful of your favorite chips and a glass of water.

dumi 1 / 6795  
Nov 7, 2013   #2
Not only delectable but also easy to create, this masterpiece is perfect for lunch

Not only delicious, but also easy to make, this masterpiece is a perfect fit for lunch.
Add a fresh leaf of green lettuce and top it off with three slices of deli-ham.

Add a fresh leaf of green lettuce and top off with three slices of deli-ham.

You need to tell that how these green lettuce and deli-ham going to be placed because this is not a curry in which you can keep adding ingredients.


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