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The graph - common activities of children of different ages



Huypham 1 / -  
Jan 5, 2026   #1
The given bar chart depicts the proportions of frequent bedtime activities in which children of nonuniform age groups in the US participate.
Overall, reading and brushing teeth are the most popular activities among children, especially those aged 4 to 5 and 6 to 8, whereas watching TV and eating are at the least common across all age groups. Moreover, the figure for brushing teeth tends to increase with aging, while that of having a bath and eating see a decline as they get older.
Regarding the chart, it is evident that reading before bed has the highest proportion when compared with other activities. 4 to 5 year-aged children account for the largest percentage with the data standing at approximately 70 percent, while that of 1 to 3 years and 6 to 8 years children are slightly lower, at roughly 63 percent and 58 percent respectively. In addition, the percentage of brushing teeth is the second highest and it witnesses consecutive growth along with aging, with the figures beginning at nearly 30 percent belonging to 1 to 3-year-old toddlers, and gradually rising to about 45 percent and peaking at around 50 percent for 4 to 5 year-aged kids and for 6 to 8 year-aged children, respectively.
By contrast, the percentage of children watching TV and eating are among the lowest according to the chart. Specifically, watching TV is slightly superior, with the data for children at the age group of 4 to 5 at roughly 19 percent, and respectively for 1 to 3 and 6 to 8 year-aged children at around 15 percent and approximately 18 percent. Additionally, in terms of eating, it is obvious that the percentage of ingestive habit decreases as children age. Therefore, regarding the figure of 1 to 3-year-old group, it stands at roughly 19 percent and steadily reduces to nearly 10 percent for 4 to 5 year-aged kids and around 8 percent for 6 to 8 age group.
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1 day ago   #2
This essay is not one that can be completed withing 20 minutes during the actual test. The 1 hour writing time should be properly allotted by the test taker, without the aid of a timing instrument, between the 2 essays. A task 1 essay should only have about 200 words in it, while the task 2 essay should have 300 words. Failure to stay within the word requirement means you will end up with a failing task 2 essay, since you will not have enough time to properly develop and write that essay. Keep the task 1 essay short. You over discussed the trending statement and failed to summarize the information presentation throughout your essay. There are too many run on sentences in the essay, which led to the over writing. So you will receive a failing score in the C+C and GRA scores for this piece of writing. It will not receive a passing score in an actual setting.


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