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The graph compares the consumption of six different energies in the USA from 1980 to 2030 prediction



thanhtra 1 / -  
Aug 22, 2021   #1
Hi, I am really appreciated with your help.

us energy consumption by fuel



The given line graph compares the consumption of six different energies in the USA in both history and future from 1980 to 2030.
In general, petrol and oil have tended to be the most common energy that were used during the observed period. Additionally, the consumption of hydropower has an slightly decrease at the end of the period while the rest of energies have used with different increases in the amount.

Far away from that 5 energies, the amount of petrol and oil is 35 quadrillions in 1980, it fluctuated volatile until 1995 then have rose steadily with projection until 2030, by 50 quadrillions. In comparison with petrol and oil, coal and natural gas have had roughly increase over the period with the amount of coal and natural gas respectively by 30 and 23 quadrillions.

Meanwhile, the USA has consumed nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower quiet lower than 3 energies is mentioned. Both nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower started with 3 quadrillions. But in prediction until 2030, nuclear and solar/wind have had small climb in the consumption, by 8 and 6 quadrillions. In contrast, the quantity of hydropower generated fluctuated from 1980 to 2005 before declined and has remained unchanged at the end of the period, with 3 quadrillions.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15393  
Aug 23, 2021   #2
The student needs to review his indefinite article usage. "A" is used before consonant sounds while "an" is used before vowel sounds. He shows confusion with regards to indefinite article usage. His noun usage is also problematic as he does not recognize that there are singular and plural noun forms. "That" is singular", "those " are plural. The same goes for "quadrillion " When used to ufer to a specific numerical measurement. It is not "quadrillions". Vocabulary skills also need development as the student tends to confuse his word usage. " Quiet" means silence while "quite" is an adverb meaning "wholly". The student must pay.more allention to his grammar and vocabulary lessons to avoid serious LR and GRA deductions. These are the error areas that will result in a failed test.


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