The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the UK in 2013 & 2014

Summarize the chart information

The bar chart illustrates how many jobless women in some nations of United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014.

Overall, there was a decline in the percentage of unemployed women in both years. In addition, the proportion of unemployed women in the year 2013 was generally higher compared to the figure for unemployed females in England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland in 2014

In 2013, the share of women who are jobless in England was at 6.8%, higher than that of unemployed women in Scotland and Northern Ireland, at 6.1% and 5.6% respectively. Meanwhile, Wales had the lowest unemployment rate of women among the four nations (5.4%).

In the following year , Scotland surpassed all four countries and had the highest unemployment rate, at 6.7%. Conversely, the rate of unemployed females in Northern Ireland was the lowest (4.6%), lower than that of unoccupied women in England and Wales at 6.5% and 5% respectively.

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The writer has not written enough words to allowthe examiner to completely assess his English report writing skills. While he met the minimum word requirement, a full assessment can be carried out only if at least 1275 words are written. The current wordcount severely limits the scoring considerations overall.

The summary presentation is improperly presented as it first assumes a qquestion presentation before shifting to a factual statement It is grammatically incorrect and confuses the reader in terms of actual thought presentation. The presentation also shows LR weakness as it uses the word "between" when the more appropriate term is "within ".

The paragraphs do not represent the correctsentence requirement of 3-5 sentences. The lack of expanded sentence presentation proves limited analytical abilities

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