Haunting photos of polar ice (TED Summary)

Humans are not separated by nature and everything is interconnected each other. These can be explained by the cycle of an iceberg. Iceberg is come from one snowflake united with other snowflakes year by year. It which is lain 200 feet in height above sea level is borne from disintegration of ice shelves. Each iceberg has special personality to interact with its environment. Some of them choose to give up and hold on bitter end, but others can crumble in a fit of dramatic passion. It is easy to think that iceberg is always separated and alone. Same as we see our self as human, but the reality is far from it. A disintegration of iceberg is followed by released mineral-rich fresh water that nourishes many forms of life. it is not the end of its life, but it is a time to give benefit for its environment. People have to take some learning from the iceberg cycle life. We have to benefit the other life until the time we have to leave.

Camille Seaman
Source: TED

Hi Fauzan,

Below some of the comments from me:

... and everything is interconnected TO each other.

Iceberg is comeS from one snowflake united ...

It which is lain 200 feet in height above sea ...

Best of luck for your writing progress

Hi..
I have some advice..

Iceberg is[comes] from one[a] snowflake united with ...
It which is lain200 feet in height above sea level ...

It is same as [what] we see our self as human...

We have to benefit [to] the other life ...

Thanks..
I hope it helps..

Humans are not separated by FROM nature and WHILE everything is interconnected each other.
Iceberg is come MADE/BUILT/STRUCTURED etc. from OF one snowflake WHICH united with other snowflakes ...
It which is lain 200 feet in height above sea level ...CONFUSING SENTENCE. = IT IS LAID 200 FEET ABOVE SEA LEVEL WHICH IS THE RESULT OF ICE SHELVES DISINTEGRATION

Same as we see our self as human, but the reality is far from it. [THIS TALKED ABOUT WHAT? ]
... iceberg is followed by released THE RELEASE OF mineral-rich fresh water ...
We have to benefit the other life LIVES until the time ...